Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Keelyvine Reus (second nomination)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Keelyvine Reus

Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 23:54, November 5, 2013 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Fine, emerald eyes in the night, gleamin' shiny and bright, as if covered with silver...

This article is very well done, and on my first read-through, I only have one minor objection. "She had her brown hair tied in bun behind her head" should probably be written "She pinned her hair in a bun behind her head, with two hair sticks."--Demos Traxen (talk) 04:03, November 6, 2013 (UTC)
- What I've done is slightly different to be inclusive of the colour, but see what you think. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 10:00, November 6, 2013 (UTC)
  - Absolutely. Even better than what I had.--Demos Traxen (talk) 18:31, November 20, 2013 (UTC)

No quotes for "The Valsedian Operation" (which should be de-capitalized since it's not a formal name) or the other sections that don't currently have quotes? She has plenty of dialogue in the webcomic.
"Appearance and attire" should be merged with Equipment and P&T, since there doesn't seem to be an overwhelming need for another section.
No image for the "Respite on Coruscant" section? There has to be at least one available. The Bts could also use one if one's available, perhaps from Tom Hodges' concept art selection.
Ref 4 should use {{WebCite}}.
The article needs to be adjusted to conform to the current policy regarding rank capitalization. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:37, January 29, 2014 (UTC)

First nomination. Some of the more PBP elements have been culled and the character is no longer in a constant state of flux. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 23:54, November 5, 2013 (UTC)