Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Keelyvine Reus

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Keelyvine Reus

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 03:05, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:TCW

(2 Inqs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Very well done. JMAS Jolly Trooper Hey, it's me! 17:09, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:24, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Well done, although that green lipstick kinda creeps me out. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 03:22, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote --Eyrezer 00:04, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ShaakTi1138 11:24, August 31, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Nice job.--ID-21 Dolphin DolphinJedi(Talk) 02:15, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Attack of the Clone
  • "Fisto jokingly suggested that she summon him through the Force—the Human was less than amused." This detail really is rather unnecessary and p-b-p, and it's not the only dialogue in the article that can be nixed. Please go through the Biography section and cut down on the multiple and excessive p-b-p elements.
  • Not an objection, but please pay closer attention to your linking and the way you refer to battle/event articles. In the case of the latter, engagements like the Battle of Devaron and the Battle of Ukio cannot be referred to as such if they haven't been canonically named in a source—which they haven't, for that matter. CC7567 (talk) 04:44, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
  • And now it needs an update from The Clone Wars: The Valsedian Operation. If you're not going to be able to keep up with the updates (since it's probably going to be a weekly thing again), I seriously would recommend waiting to promote this article, as it's going to be a pain to update. CC7567 (talk) 08:11, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Unaddressed objections for over three weeks. CC7567 (talk) 03:18, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote And with pretty much weekly changes, Rule 5, too. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 03:31, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 08:56, September 28, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 23:13, September 28, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:14, September 28, 2010 (UTC)