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Josef Grunger
- Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 20:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Yes, that's right... another Grand Admiral!
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
Very good. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 22:27, April 27, 2010 (UTC)- Nice. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:16, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Very good. Graestan(Talk) 22:34, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
Very nice. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:00, May 4, 2010 (UTC)- —Tommy 9281 21:39, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:04, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Object
- G-stan:
More detail on the reference book appearances, please. Also, the word "sourcebook" is likely incorrect, as that is an RPG term. Unless some sources aren't listed.- My bad; I always thought "sourcebook" and "reference book" were interchangeable. As it stands, there were only two - The Essential Chronology and The New Essential Chronology, both of which have been linked to in the BTS.
Needed a copy-edit, language was kinda hasty. I may have missed things; please go over it again just in case.- Bah. That's what happens when you don't have much time to work on something, I suppose. I went through the article, and I couldn't find anything else.
- Graestan(Talk) 22:36, April 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing this, Grae. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 00:58, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing this, Grae. Grand Moff Tranner
- Toprawa:
I believe Cull created an article for this fellow for Miltin Takel. Please look and link as appropriate: "Grunger was assisting Takel's second-in-command in patrolling the Mandalore sector"- Link added.
"Marine" in the cut-content section is currently a disambig link. Would it be safe to link this to Galactic Marines? Or perhaps the redlinked "Republic marine" in that disambig page?The original version of "Who's Who" doesn't provide any context on what kind of marine he was. I suppose "Republic marine" would fit the bill, though.
Is "the Grand Admiral" here meant to refer to Takel or Grunger himself? If it's Grunger, please just say "himself," and if it's Takel, please just say "Takel" to avoid any such confusion: "to dupe Imperial commanders into turning over their vessels to the Grand Admiral." Toprawa and Ralltiir 16:27, April 29, 2010 (UTC)- Clarified. Thanks for the review, Tope. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:37, April 29, 2010 (UTC)
- Clarified. Thanks for the review, Tope. Grand Moff Tranner
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:04, May 5, 2010 (UTC)