- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Huoba Neva
- Nominated by: Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 09:12, July 14, 2010 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Non DarkStryder nom, just to break the pattern and stop you all getting bored.
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Yay, DESB! Xicer9
(Combadge) 17:50, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:42, July 16, 2010 (UTC)- Will we be seeing Syub Snunb any time soon? Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 17:40, August 1, 2010 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:49, August 2, 2010 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:46, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Xicer
Infobox: The comic doesn't say her homeworld is Sullust. Actually, I don't think the DESB says she's a native of Sullust either, despite her being Sullustan.- Removed.
I dont believe it's specifically stated that her father was the Executive Board Member of SoroSuub. It could be her mother for all we know.- Changed. Not sure how I arrived at that conclusion.
Final mission: "...Solo realized that the density of wreckage would be too much for the frigates following him to handle, and ordered the ships to change vector and go through a larger gap in the debris." A small technicality, but Leia actually orders them to change course in the audio drama, not Han.- Clarified and added Leia to the paragraph.
I think it's worth noting in the Bts that Rebellion was the first (and only) work to physically depict her.- Added.
Also worth noting is the fact that she has a masculine (and distinctly Human) voice in the audio drama, which you can probably tie into her being referred to as a male in the Rebellion guide.- Added masculine traits, but tying them to her being referenced as male in Rebellion is borderline OR in my opinion without a source to back it up.
You can probably glean some stuff from her stats table in the DESB, such as her location sense and the fact that she keeps a holocrystal of her family with her.- Location sense is a generic game mechanics trait assigned to all Sullustans, so that's more relevant to the Sullustan article. Added holocrystal mention.
- And I believe that's it! Only a handful of DESB characters left now. Xicer9(Combadge) 16:50, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review :) - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 17:37, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review :) - Cavalier One
Attack of the Floyd
Quote for the P&T? What about the two body sections that lack them?- There's not really any more relevant quotes.
Intro: "He convinced her to defect to the Rebel Alliance." A bit of a choppy sentence. You could easily merge it with the preceding sentence.- Rewritten slightly - merging would have caused an unseemly run-on sentence.
Intro: A little more context is needed regarding the rescue mission to Coruscant. Why were they rescuing the ship? Who were they battling? Clarify.- Clarified.
"Neva was unsure at the beginning; she was not a rebel and she had no real interest in politics." I don't get this. Of course she wasn't a rebel, she was still in the Empire. I think I know what you mean by this, but you need to reword this sentence to better get your meaning across.- Reworded. The original source said anarchist and i was trying to avoid the exact wording. Changed to revolutionary.
- That's all. Good job. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:26, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 19:53, July 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:47, August 4, 2010 (UTC)