Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Heff Tobber

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Heff Tobber

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:17, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Really happy that it turned out that not only was Tobber in the film but was that he was also the only "unnamed" Blue Squadron pilot we see in-cockpit
  • Date Archived: 01:58, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1278 words (180 introduction, 932 body, 166 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1278 words (180 introduction, 932 body, 166 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. That leaves Taslet Colb, Antoc Merrick, Robich Duggsin, Calum Gram and Paril Ritta. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:20, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 01:52, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 16:10, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 00:47, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Rogue One: A Star Wars Story took Rebel Pilot suits and made them BLUE Fan26 (Talk) 22:08, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
  6. Booply (talk) 21:57, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
  7. Bonzane10 Sabine Starbird (holonet) 00:40, 21 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • "Entry denied"'s second paragraph has a duplicate reference (Green Squadron bit).
  • Eadu is introduced without any context.
    • Added a mention of the Eadu mission further up since he might have been part of it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:51, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Battle of Yavin should be given a date. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:23, 14 February 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • The infobox says he had "fair" skin but the article body says it was "light." I'm not sure which we favour now, but I think it ought to be consistent whichever we choose. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:44, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Changed to light, which is atleast what I stick with at the moment. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Oh, likewise, the infobox says he had black hair but the body says it was brown. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:45, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Fixed, and good to see you back on the nomination pages! Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:01, 6 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:58, 21 March 2024 (UTC)