Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Haydel Goravvus

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Haydel Goravvus

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I found two things that weren't linked that really should have been - "swoop gang" and "politics." I took care of them, but because it wasn't just the one, I'm just going to make a general request that you have a scan through the article and look for anything else that might need linking. I have to log off now, I may be back with more objections later. ProfessorTofty (talk) 00:24, May 31, 2017 (UTC)
There seems to be some inconsistency as to whether not "resistance" is capitalized when referring to it as simply "Resistance" and not "Taris Resistance." I can see this in some cases, but in the intro you have "the Mandalorians hit the resistance first," yet later in the article you have "the Mandalorians used that climactic moment to strike directly at the Resistance base." ProfessorTofty (talk) 21:12, May 31, 2017 (UTC)
- Both should be addressed. IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 03:21, June 16, 2017 (UTC)

Per WP:S, backup links should be added to the external link citations.
Per WP:MOS, {{CSWECite}} shouldn't be used in the Sources list in this instance. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:22, September 24, 2017 (UTC)

Unaddressed objections more than two weeks old. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:44, October 8, 2017 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (talk) 20:46, October 8, 2017 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 20:53, October 8, 2017 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:29, October 11, 2017 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:00, October 12, 2017 (UTC)