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Grizz Frix

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 23:24, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Already one of dem GA things.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:40, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Nice. --Imperialles 16:30, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
  3. I agree! Nice. Menkooroo 02:41, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 13:36, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Graestan(Talk) 16:00, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  7. -- 1358 (Talk) 14:41, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Grand Master
    • "inspired by Angela Phillips's short story Slaying Dragons, which was included in the Tales of the Bounty Hunters anthology." Do you mean "Tales From the Empire?"
      • Gah! Brain fart. Fixed.
    • More of a question than an objection: does the source actually state that it was "bad luck" that prevented him from eventually joining Rogue Squadron? If not, that's a little speculative/POV.
      • I've changed it to "mishap."
    • Fine work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review, and the linking. I'm a tad embarrassed... wrote this a long time ago, but I probably should have checked it again for links. :S Thefourdotelipsis 00:37, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Just a coupla post-IRC objections...
    • Can you give context on Rogue Squadron and Mon Mothma? I realize they're linked to, but even a single extra word or two, respectively naming them as an elite starfighter group and the Alliance COS, maybe (Rogue Squadron in the intro too)?
      • Done.
    • Should the last sentence of the first paragraph of bts be sourced to his db entry? As it doesn't mention his db entry, it's not really self-sourcing. Menkooroo 01:53, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:42, June 2, 2010 (UTC)