Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Graak (lawbreaker)/Legends

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Graak (lawbreaker)/Legends

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:25, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My first FAN! Might I ask the Inquisitorius to learn from Graak's tale and strive to be teh compassion, and not teh evil. :P
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:EWOKS

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Support

1. Reviewed via discord, very nice work. Congratulations on the first FA nom! Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 04:41, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
2. Well done.Liverpool92 15:55, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
3. Headcanon: Simon cut his eye out. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:40, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
4. Graak could've fought off the Sanyassans single-handedly. DwartiiDelver (talk) 16:04, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
   • Agreed on both counts :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:14, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
5. OtterSurf (talk) 10:09, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
6. It's almost as if they wanted to make him Graak :P OOM 224 08:28, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
7. MasterFred(talk) 22:44, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
8. UberSoldat93 (talk) 18:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

• Wicket learning about Graak should be mentioned prior to their encounter, ideally at the end of the first section. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 16:03, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Good idea. Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:14, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
    • It should still be stated after Graak's banishment is written about, given that Wicket knows that part too. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:51, 1 June 2021 (UTC)
• His belt can be mentioned in the Equipment section. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:51, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• Per Wookieepedia:Images#Cropping, speech bubbles that are cut off should have the text in them removed. 1358 ^(Talk) 12:56, 23 August 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• A little bit of explanation for Joddar turning against Graak would be helpful in the intro's last paragraph. I'd say there's no need to go into what happened between him and Wicket and Teebo though. Mentioning he learnt compassion from them is sufficient.
  • How's that?
• "calling it "survival of the fittest."" — not needed in the Biography; instead, this would make good P&T material.
  • Fixed.
• "Teebo slipped, hanging on only by a small plant. As the warriors prepared to attack Teebo with their spears" — this part isn't really relevant to Graak. OOM 224 16:01, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Should be fixed. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:50, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Looks good OOM 224 16:57, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
• Lastly, there are quite a few instances of "after" in the article, so it could do with a bit of variation OOM 224 17:32, 18 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Changed a few. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:09, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Can you clarify where Warrick is in the image under "Capturing the Ewoks"?
• There is space for another image under "The Ewok hunt." UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:30, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Big thanks to Amino for providing me with digital images. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:25, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
  • And now to Dentface for even higher quality ones :P JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:00, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
• I will be away for the next two weeks and therefore not he able to address objections; feel free to list them, but I'm asking the Inquisitorious not to take down this nom. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:27, 21 October 2021 (UTC)