- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Galia
- Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:43, January 25, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: To go along with Oron Kira.
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
Quite a few "5.3 Factual corrections," etc. —Tommy 9281 Friday, March 11, 2011, 22:21 UTC- Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:16, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:26, March 19, 2011 (UTC)
- GTQ 03:41, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 21:52, March 31, 2011 (UTC)- Per an IRC review. Kilson 22:22, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Toprawa
Quote in final bio subsection needs to be revised per site-accepted style.Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:17, March 15, 2011 (UTC)- Fixed. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:57, March 15, 2011 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
Ascension to the throne: However at the start of the third paragraph doesn't follow on from the end of the previous paragraph.- Addressed.
The Naddist crisis: "[Null] entered suddenly through the planet's surface…" Can you enter outside? Emerged?- Addressed.
Personality and traits: Slightly confusing that she loves both her parents, then doesn't show much affection to her father a couple of sentences later. Can you reword it to follow better? Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:45, March 16, 2011 (UTC)- Addressed. Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:07, March 19, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
If she was born on Onderon, please include this with her date of birth in the infobox.- Included.
Please clarify the "they" mentioned here: "In 3,996 BBY, they faced another menace..."- Clarified.
Her birth year should be mentioned in the bio.- Mentioned.
- That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 00:53, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:57, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:01, April 2, 2011 (UTC)