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Freck
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 23:39, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Best Kenobi character, change my mind.
- Date Archived: 18:12, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1132 words (133 introduction, 648 body, 351 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1105 words (118 introduction, 637 body, 350 behind the scenes)
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Support
good soup BloodOfIrizi(Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))(Syndicure) 17:46, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
"I can't play Freck all on my own" — Zach Braff, probably Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:15, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
Objections handled via Discord.—spookywillowwtalk 21:33, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 17:22, 26 June 2023 (UTC)- Panther436 (talk) 23:50, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
- Tomotron
Sith Council 11:01, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- Great work!
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:16, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 11:31, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
- Hopefully Braha continues and nominates Hype Fazon NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 18:04, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
Object
Ziara
i wouldn't pipelink "attacked" to Battle on Mapuzo - that happens later and is not relevant to Freck- That skirmish is classed as part of the conflict in said article, so it's applicable imo.
maybe mention the first stormtrooper pickup/dropoff in a short sentence in the intro? idk your call- Already done that "transporting some stormtroopers along the way."
is Braff's role in Scrubs really notable to be on Freck's page? seems like something that should go on Braff's page- While it's not required to note people's past works outside of Star Wars, I think it's a good set up for the Donald Faison stuff.
copy editBloodOfIrizi(talk) 00:33, 20 December 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks! Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 07:49, 20 December 2022 (UTC)
you switch between referring to them as Kenobi/Organa and Orden/Luma throughout the body, i think it'd be better if they were called Kenobi/Organa throughout, save for this line The driver introduced the troopers to "Orden" and "Luma,"BloodOfIrizi(Syndicure) 23:07, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
- This better? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:19, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
spookly
Intro could be buffed out just a small bit.—spookywillowwtalk 01:40, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
Panther
I think the equipment section should include his repulsorcraft transport.Panther436 (talk) 02:59, 9 July 2023 (UTC)- This alright? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:07, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:11, 15 July 2023 (UTC)