Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Freck

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Freck

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:39, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Best Kenobi character, change my mind.
• Date Archived: 18:12, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1132 words (133 introduction, 648 body, 351 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1105 words (118 introduction, 637 body, 350 behind the scenes)
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Support

good soup BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 17:46, 27 April 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II^(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))

1. "I can't play Freck all on my own" — Zach Braff, probably Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:15, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
2. Objections handled via Discord.—spookywilloww^talk 21:33, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 17:22, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
4. Panther436 (talk) 23:50, 11 July 2023 (UTC)
5. Tomotron^{Sith Council} 11:01, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
6. Great work! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:16, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
7. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:31, 15 July 2023 (UTC)
8. Hopefully Braha continues and nominates Hype Fazon NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 18:04, 15 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

• i wouldn't pipelink "attacked" to Battle on Mapuzo - that happens later and is not relevant to Freck
  • That skirmish is classed as part of the conflict in said article, so it's applicable imo.
• maybe mention the first stormtrooper pickup/dropoff in a short sentence in the intro? idk your call
  • Already done that "transporting some stormtroopers along the way."
• is Braff's role in Scrubs really notable to be on Freck's page? seems like something that should go on Braff's page
  • While it's not required to note people's past works outside of Star Wars, I think it's a good set up for the Donald Faison stuff.
• copy edit BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:33, 20 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:49, 20 December 2022 (UTC)
• you switch between referring to them as Kenobi/Organa and Orden/Luma throughout the body, i think it'd be better if they were called Kenobi/Organa throughout, save for this line The driver introduced the troopers to "Orden" and "Luma," BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 23:07, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • This better? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:19, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Intro could be buffed out just a small bit.—spookywilloww^talk 01:40, 6 June 2023 (UTC)

Panther

• I think the equipment section should include his repulsorcraft transport. Panther436 (talk) 02:59, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
  • This alright? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 21:07, 11 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:11, 15 July 2023 (UTC)