- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Farstine
- Nominated by: Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 18:50, May 20, 2013 (UTC) - Nomination comments: First WEG EU planet? Over 1,000 words? Seriously, I was thinking GAN here.
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Support
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 00:48, May 21, 2013 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 11:03, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Cade
Calrayn 21:04, August 27, 2013 (UTC) - CC7567 (talk) 19:10, September 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Yep yep. Thefourdotelipsis (talk) 04:10, September 30, 2013 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 12:35, October 5, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
In the body you source that fact that its in the Mid Rim to 2, while the infobox has it as ref 1.- I see your confusion here, so I will clarify; the Online Companion places Farstine in the Mid Rim. However, the maps in The Essential Atlas shows just where in the Mid Rim Farstine is placed: on the edge, in the Trailing Sectors. Since this information is not conveyed by the Online Companion reference, I referenced it to the Atlas instead. For clarity, I have amended the reference to note the exact page in the Atlas where the information comes from.
The part about the population in 25 ABY should be moved to the History section I think.- Usually, information on the population is always located in the Description section. The qualifier of it being dated to 25 ABY does muddle issue slightly, true, but I feel it should still be located in that section.
Could you completely ref the BtS? Right now its off and on. Good work.501st dogma(talk) 00:19, May 28, 2013 (UTC)- The rest of the BTS is self-sourcing; only those facts that need explanation (Fry's comments, TOR dating, etc) need to be referenced. - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 10:19, May 28, 2013 (UTC)
- The rest of the BTS is self-sourcing; only those facts that need explanation (Fry's comments, TOR dating, etc) need to be referenced. - Sir Cavalier of One
Attack of the Clone
Since you cite page numbers for all of the Atlas maps, I'd recommend doing so for the rest of the Atlas and the other printed sources as well for consistency.- Should be good now.
Is it known which rank Grant held at the time of the battle at Farstine? That would be useful to mention in the intro and History.- Nope. A Moff Grant is mentioned in the source, but whether or not they are one and the same is a matter of debate I believe.
Context needed for Sentepeth Findos.CC7567 (talk) 14:57, September 17, 2013 (UTC)- Added. - Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 19:05, September 22, 2013 (UTC)
- Added. - Sir Cavalier of One
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:35, October 5, 2013 (UTC)