Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Fanry

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Fanry

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 23:54, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Very happy with how it turned out, she's a great character.
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. DFaceG (talk) 06:32, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
2. Good job :) Samonic (Talk) 07:39, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:57, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:40, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:50, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
6. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 02:24, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
7. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 16:41, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

Object

DFaceG

• The use of "(pictured)" on images is not necessary, at least not for every single image. DFaceG (talk) 06:07, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nicked away most of them, felt the first kinda needed it though.—spookywilloww^talk 06:19, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
    • Instead of utilizing "pictured" or "logo pictured" in parenthesis for the Jedi Order and Galactic Republic logos, the captions could be rephrased to indicate that they were the logos without going into an aside. DFaceG (talk) 06:26, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
• Is there a higher resolution version of the image used for the Blackguard? DFaceG (talk) 06:09, 21 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Nope. There's only a few places to pull that book cover from, and it's a very slim slice of the cover that has the blackguards on it.—spookywilloww^talk 06:19, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• "Fanry allowed Cady to have a droid remove her slave-tracking chip, freeing the attendant from Czerka" The connection between Cady and Czerka hasn't been established until this point, it'd be good to mention it earlier
  • Slipped it in.—spookywilloww^talk 00:55, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
• The picture of Sadie Sink from Claudia Gray's tumblr would be beneficial for readers in the BTS Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:04, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
  • Added - it does bump into the Appearances header for me despite the small image size, not quite sure what to do about that. May also be because my screen scaling is quite small, unsure how it appears for others.—spookywilloww^talk 00:55, 6 October 2022 (UTC)
    • It looks fine from my end, although the general preference is that the first BTS image looks better on the right side. Not going to extend the objection tho Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:57, 7 October 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• If Rael was a mentor to her then I believe he should be added to the infobox as a master, similar to Karyn Faro.
  • Added.—spookywilloww^talk 15:33, 16 October 2022 (UTC)
• Reviewing note: Some subjects are given the same context in the Biography more than once and there were a lot of commas in between dependent clauses and instances of missing commas between independent clauses, all of which I've fixed in copy-edits among some other minor blemishes. All that aside, good work on the write-up! UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:37, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Sorry about leaving that many behind. But thanks!—spookywilloww^talk 15:33, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• "Jinn refused to ratify the Governance Treaty at the crowning, fearing something bad would happen" – Can you replace "bad" with a better word, perhaps? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 20:20, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
  • Replaced with 'adverse', perhaps that suits better? —spookywilloww^talk 21:29, 19 October 2022 (UTC)
    • Indeed, sounds better. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:50, 20 October 2022 (UTC)

Comments

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Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:50, 20 October 2022 (UTC)