Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser (second nomination)

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Dreadnought-class heavy cruiser

Nominated by: Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:08, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 07:59, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 2271 words (287 introduction, 1501 body, 483 behind the scenes)
WookieeProject (optional): Ambition, Chiss, Comics, Fantasy Flight Games, Rebels

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OOM 224 (he/him) 09:30, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
Glad to see this one again! UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:25, 11 April 2023 (UTC)
~~Let's hope the Katana fleet doesn't appear in Ahsoka. :P Samonic ^(Talk) 19:26, 20 April 2023 (UTC)~~ (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II^(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))
—spookywilloww^talk 01:03, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 16:53, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 19:11, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
Panther436 (talk) 21:41, 4 August 2023 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 07:58, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Interesting combination of sources! Just wanted to point out with my copy-edit that compounds with adjectives ending in "-ly" shouldn't be hyphenated. Otherwise, I have only one objection: "Although Grievous had the kidnapped Supreme Chancellor Sheev Palpatine…" — I think this sentence here is a bit too long. OOM 224 (he/him) 10:22, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Oh, thanks for the tip! Also, instead of splitting that sentence in two, I ended up restructuring the paragraph. How does that look? Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:32, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
  - Nice, that reads better. OOM 224 (he/him) 09:30, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

Two-Player Game card needs in-universe documentation as well. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:13, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:28, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
~~I would like the lead quote to clarify that the blockade included Dreadnoughts.~~
~~Context for Nevil Cygni.~~
~~Please specify that Dark Force Rising was the first Legends appearance when discussing the Thrawn Trilogy.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:39, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- All addressed. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:12, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
~~The officer from the lead quote can get his own article.~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:59, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:34, 10 April 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 07:58, 11 August 2023 (UTC)

Heads-up: WP:CHISS covers all subjects from Timothy Zahn's books, (The Dreadnaught-class heavy cruiser appeared in the Thrawn Trilogy and Thrawn (2017), so this includes this article.) if you want, you can add the project's category to this nomination. Samonic ^(Talk) 19:26, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
- Added :) Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:43, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
I'd like to ask a question. Since BMF gives the Legends name as an alternate name for the canon version, should the categories not be merged together? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 18:29, 29 July 2023 (UTC)
- I don't really see what benefit can be gained by merging canon and Legends Dreadnoughts. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:58, 29 July 2023 (UTC)