Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Cinda Tarheel/Legends

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Cinda Tarheel

• Nominated by: Menkooroo (talk) 02:45, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Soma
  is what they would take when
  hard times opened their eyes...

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:14, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:17, December 31, 2013 (UTC)
3. Looks weird in a helmet 2/10 would not bang IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:40, March 3, 2014 (UTC)
4. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 15:11, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 00:14, March 19, 2014 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:23, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
7. Nahdar Vebb (talk) 18:46, March 21, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Hanzo

• Her pilot outfit should be written about in a separate equipment section. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:00, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
  • No... no, that's not happening. Sorry. I've already made my opinion on this clear (long story short: The Layout Guide doesn't even mandate an Equipment section at all, and creating one just to say "This character wore clothes" is ridiculous), but feel free to bring it to the Senate Hall or the CT if you want to try to change the LG. Menkooroo (talk) 03:41, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, as nothing official mandates it, struck. Just a note: I do agree with your assertion that just saying one wore clothes would be ridiculous, but I think equipment should be reserved for uniforms, military outfits, etc. So something like Thul Fain's robe and boots wouldn't be worth mentioning imo, and that's why I make no such mention of it in that article. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 05:10, November 12, 2013 (UTC)
      • I get your point about military uniforms vs. clothing. I tend to think that an equipment section should be reserved for something unique, though. Just as all Twi'leks have Lekku, and lekku don't need to be mentioned in a Twi'lek character's article, all Rebel pilots wear Rebel pilot uniforms. Read the Twi'lek article to read about lekku, and read the Rebel pilot article to read about Rebel pilot uniforms. Make sense? A unique uniform, like Corran Horn's green one, would be a different story, though. Menkooroo (talk) 05:14, November 12, 2013 (UTC)

Tar Heels suck, go Cuse

• I think the intro quote ("I didn't rise to the rank of Captain in the Alliance just to end up a side dish on some scaly-tongued maniac's table!") could be fodder for the P&T. IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 04:27, March 2, 2014 (UTC)
  • Hmmmm whaddya have in mind? I figured it was covered by "Tarheel was belligerent and insulting toward King S'Shah after being kidnapped by him." Menkooroo (talk) 04:45, March 2, 2014 (UTC)
    • Something about how the fact that she thought that because she accomplished what she accomplished she should be afforded better treatment and respect? IFYLOFD ^{(Enter the Floydome)} 03:27, March 3, 2014 (UTC)
      • Gotcha. Added some to that sentence. Menkooroo (talk) 03:39, March 3, 2014 (UTC)

Green Tentacle

• Should "Captain" in the opening quote be in lower case? Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 15:07, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Yeah, probably. It's all caps in the comic, so this must be something I did. Changed. Menkooroo (talk) 00:15, March 18, 2014 (UTC)

Nahdar

• Jang asked me to review the article. Blame him.
• Could you mention the cannibalistic nature of the King in the intro? Otherwise, "After learning that her fate lay on the King's dinner plate" is a bit confusing.
  • Done. Added a missing link to the bio, too.
• Please paraphrase "establish a friendly set of eyes and ears", it seems to be an unnecessary personification. Nahdar Vebb (talk) 19:35, March 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Made it more simple. How's it look? And thanks for the review. Menkooroo (talk) 11:42, March 21, 2014 (UTC)
  • Perfect. :) Nahdar Vebb (talk) 18:46, March 21, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:19, March 21, 2014 (UTC)