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Bulwark Mark III
- Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:44, December 14, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A rare FAN from Toprawa. Went over 1000 with Warfare update.
(4 Inqs/4 Users/8 Total)
Support
JangFett (Talk) 16:16, December 15, 2012 (UTC)
Clean.—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:15, December 16, 2012 (UTC)
- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 18:09, December 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Plagueis327 (talk) 05:55, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:20, December 25, 2012 (UTC)- Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 22:14, January 9, 2013 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 19:41, January 14, 2013 (UTC)- ~Savage
05:43, January 19, 2013 (UTC)
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Savaged…
The distribution of its turbolasers and ion cannons is currently infobox exclusive. Tis all. ~Savage
13:07, January 9, 2013 (UTC)- Thanks for the review, Bob. Just leaving a note to say that I'm not intentionally neglecting this, just haven't gotten around to it yet. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:58, January 14, 2013 (UTC)
- Ok, worked them in. How's that work for you?
- Also, regarding your review, I wanted to suggest changing "more" back to "most" in those two places, only because those two sources (Star Wars: Rebellion and CSWE) both describe the Bulwark as "one of the most" armored/durable vessels of the Rebel Fleet. I feel like there's a slight change in meaning otherwise. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:31, January 19, 2013 (UTC)
- The OS is technically grammatically incorrect, then! The rule is that there can only be one thing that is the most of something, so the phrase "one of the most" is inherently incorrect. It's pretty much become standard English nowadays, and only a few stalwarts such as myself are resisting it, though, so I won't oppose or be offended if you want to change it back. :) ~Savage
05:43, January 19, 2013 (UTC)
- The OS is technically grammatically incorrect, then! The rule is that there can only be one thing that is the most of something, so the phrase "one of the most" is inherently incorrect. It's pretty much become standard English nowadays, and only a few stalwarts such as myself are resisting it, though, so I won't oppose or be offended if you want to change it back. :) ~Savage
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 07:14, January 19, 2013 (UTC)