- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Brintooin
- Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 11:37, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A GA that grew too long.
- Date Archived: 12:33, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1026 words (199 introduction, 705 body, 122 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1012 words (196 introduction, 694 body, 122 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:AMBITION
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Support
Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:59, 2 March 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 23:31, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 13:29, 22 April 2023 (UTC) - UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:21, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
- BloodOfIrizi (Syndicure) 15:27, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
- Samonic (Talk) 16:28, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
- AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:10, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
In the intro you have the Hammers choosing the world as a base prior to the Galactic Civil War, but in the body it's more precisely prior to the Battle of Turak IV, with the GCW not actually linked anywhere.Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:35, 2 March 2023 (UTC)- You're right, thanks. Imperators II(Talk) 11:07, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- You've still got it as prior to the GCW in the intro, but if the source only says prior to the battle then we shouldn't say prior to the GCW since it might have been chosen after the start of the GCW but prior to the battle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:15, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- It doesn't say "prior to" the GCW in the intro, it says "by the time of the GCW", which isn't necessarily the same thing. Imperators II(Talk) 11:34, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- I think it just reads funny to me because you say by the war then that the battle occurred in the intro and just go straight to the battle in the body which makes the intro feel like its separating out the timing more than the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:38, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- Alright, then. :P Imperators II(Talk) 11:42, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- I think it just reads funny to me because you say by the war then that the battle occurred in the intro and just go straight to the battle in the body which makes the intro feel like its separating out the timing more than the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:38, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- It doesn't say "prior to" the GCW in the intro, it says "by the time of the GCW", which isn't necessarily the same thing. Imperators II(Talk) 11:34, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- You've still got it as prior to the GCW in the intro, but if the source only says prior to the battle then we shouldn't say prior to the GCW since it might have been chosen after the start of the GCW but prior to the battle. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:15, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- You're right, thanks. Imperators II(Talk) 11:07, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:32, 23 April 2023 (UTC)