- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Beryl Chiffonage
- Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:53, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(7 Inqs/1 Users/8 Total)
Support
-- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:05, 4 June 2008 (UTC)- Graestan(Talk) 00:46, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
- Greyman(Talk) 01:22, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
- (Thunderer 02:20, 11 June 2008 (UTC))
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 21:45, 21 June 2008 (UTC)- Though I hate the infobox image. Green Tentacle (Talk) 22:19, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
- "Beryl?" Thefourdotelipsis 12:46, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 13:31, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- Stuff:
I'd like to see maybe two of the first three sections merged; they all seem a bit short.- Merged the second and third.
The development of Rogue Doctrine (or at least the parts relevant to Credal) should come before Credal's disapearance in the bio, in order to avoid confusion.- Reordered.
Since pretty much anything can from Alliance Intelligence Reports can be used as quotes, a few quotes in the bio/P&T would be greatly appreciated.- Added quote to the P&T. If you have any other quote suggestions you'd like to see, please let me know. Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:55, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
Lastly, perhaps an image of an AT-AT being downed for the "Battle of Hoth" section?- You read my mind. I wanted to show the exact same thing. I'll see what I can do. If anyone wants to grab an image, cool. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:24, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
- Nice work. Bland character. :-P -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:47, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
"Instead, Skywalker ordered the Rogues to use their harpoons and tow cables to trip the walkers' legs in a last ditch effort to stop their advance." Wait, wait-you stated earlier that Attack Pattern Delta was planned to include harpoons and tow cables. How is that last ditch then, if that tactic had been devised in advance with Imperial walkers in mind. Clear this up, please.- I'm afraid I'm a bit confused myself. :P Attack Pattern Delta never included the harpoon tactic, they are separate maneuvers apart of the Rogue Doctrine. This is meant to imply that after the failure of Attack Pattern Delta ("That armor is too strong for blasters"), they utilized the tow cable tactic as a do-or-die sort of thing. Can you clarify for me a bit? Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:39, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
- I added a wee bit to try and clarify the individual aspects of the Doctrine, and added a quote to the Battle of Hoth section. If you would like some more, let me know. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:21, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
- I'm afraid I'm a bit confused myself. :P Attack Pattern Delta never included the harpoon tactic, they are separate maneuvers apart of the Rogue Doctrine. This is meant to imply that after the failure of Attack Pattern Delta ("That armor is too strong for blasters"), they utilized the tow cable tactic as a do-or-die sort of thing. Can you clarify for me a bit? Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:39, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
There's nothing in the Movie Trilogy Sourcebook? Or is it just a brief mention?- The Movie Trilogy Sourcebook is merely a compilation of the three movie-based Galaxy Guides. In this case, #3. Thefourdotelipsis 01:45, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, MTS just has what appears in GG3. No new info. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:39, 4 July 2008 (UTC)
- The Movie Trilogy Sourcebook is merely a compilation of the three movie-based Galaxy Guides. In this case, #3. Thefourdotelipsis 01:45, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 15:50, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:15, 7 July 2008 (UTC)
- There is only one available image for this guy, from Who's Who in Echo Base in Insider 74. If anyone can grab that image for this article, that would be great. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:53, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Done. (Although it ain't exactly pretty.) -- Ozzel 07:15, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- It'd probably be good to also find him in the film itself, and put a screencap of that in there, to serve as confirmation as well as illustration. Thefourdotelipsis 08:08, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- The only real image of him is a tiny appearance over Rieekan's shoulder, which is where this infobox pic comes from, zoomed in on him. I don't know how well it would work. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:21, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
- I don't think it would hurt, as long as the caption pointed him out. Thefourdotelipsis 04:32, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah, I don't have a problem with putting anything in there, but I can't grab anything. There's an even better picture of that same screen shot, pulled back a little bit, in the Complete Visual Dictionary. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:17, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
- I don't think it would hurt, as long as the caption pointed him out. Thefourdotelipsis 04:32, 8 June 2008 (UTC)
- The only real image of him is a tiny appearance over Rieekan's shoulder, which is where this infobox pic comes from, zoomed in on him. I don't know how well it would work. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:21, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
- It'd probably be good to also find him in the film itself, and put a screencap of that in there, to serve as confirmation as well as illustration. Thefourdotelipsis 08:08, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Done. (Although it ain't exactly pretty.) -- Ozzel 07:15, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- OK, I got three images here, and they all look like they could be Chiffonage...to me, that is. Also, the third one...kinda doesn't look like him, but it does in other parts of that shot. File:BerylMaybe.jpg, File:BerylMaybe2.jpg, File:BerylMaybe3.jpg. Thefourdotelipsis 12:18, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
- I appreciate the effort, but the first one is Romas Navander, I also suspect the second one to be of Navander as I'm working on his article, though I'm uncertain. The third one is Wyron Serper. Strangely enough, Chiffonage isn't really shown in the movie except for the back of his head. The actual photos of him from the set are zoomed out from the camera ratio seen on the film. I suspect they're production-type photos. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:46, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
- Righto, they just kinda looked like him to me. :P Thefourdotelipsis 02:04, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
- I appreciate the effort, but the first one is Romas Navander, I also suspect the second one to be of Navander as I'm working on his article, though I'm uncertain. The third one is Wyron Serper. Strangely enough, Chiffonage isn't really shown in the movie except for the back of his head. The actual photos of him from the set are zoomed out from the camera ratio seen on the film. I suspect they're production-type photos. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:46, 1 July 2008 (UTC)