Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Bek

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Bek

  • Nominated by: Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 17:58, 21 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First FAN in over a decade, and I couldn't think of a better character for my return. I'd die for Bek, and that's not an exaggeration.
  • Date Archived: 03:22, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1235 words (285 introduction, 889 body, 61 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:GE

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:55, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Mon Calamari for the win, as usual. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:20, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 03:37, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 06:20, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
  5. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:29, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
  6. Rise of the Resistance was such a good ride. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 14:30, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
  7. My conspiracy theory is that he was originally developed as an Ackbar anamatronic but once they realized that he would be dead during the park's timeline changed his skin color and his name to make a new character Panther436 (talk) 01:54, 25 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Uber
  • Context for Pacara and Hux.
    • Addressed.
      • You call Hux a "First Order leader" later in the paragraph, can you specify this on his first mention? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:19, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
        • I'm a tad confused. Isn't that evident from "General"? Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 16:08, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
          • Not really, what with "leader" being a subjective term. Are you referring to people at the very top like Ren and Snoke (For what it's worth, Hux obviously ranks below them) or the people at First Order High Command? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:55, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
            • Just generic "leader," so anyone in an official leadership position. But I've gone ahead and reworded the entire phrase to remove the word and still make it clear which "two" were going back to the bridge. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 18:24, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
  • I'm not sure the image of the walkers can be taken as canonical seeing as there are park visitors depicted.
    • I felt it was ok due to any blatantly OOU clothing being hidden, but I've changed it just to be safe.
  • Review note: Solid work overall! Please take care with missing links, and even what continuity you're linking to. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:30, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
    • I've looked through yours and J-Mac's copy-edits and taken notes. Thanks for the heads up and kind words! Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 00:04, 23 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • What is the difference between ref 1 and ref 2? They both seem to refer to information found in the Rise of Resistance ride.ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 21:40, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Ref 2 refers to things that someone riding the ride could experience as a part of the ride itself, as in the physical ride and it's recorded audio elements and such. Ref 1 refers to background information that only exists in show documentation for employees to use in conversations with park guests. You'd never get that information just from going on the ride. You'd have to somehow get an employee to mention it, and also be lucky enough to have an employee that knows the show documentation that thoroughly. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 03:35, 23 February 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:48, 25 February 2024 (UTC)