Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Attack on an Imperial convoy

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  • 1 Attack on an Imperial convoy
    • 1.1 (4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 AV-6R7
        • 1.1.2.2 Green Tentacle
        • 1.1.2.3 Yung Floydman
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Attack on an Imperial convoy

  • Nominated by: Brandon Rhea(talk) 07:39, June 22, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: something something something wit - Brandon Rhea(talk) 07:39, June 22, 2015 (UTC)

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Coruscantfan (Talk) 22:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)
  2. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:14, June 25, 2015 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:54, September 18, 2015 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:06, September 22, 2015 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:12, October 8, 2015 (UTC)
  6. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 03:14, October 8, 2015 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)

Object

AV-6R7
  • Although some sources call the asteroid itself Fort Anaxes, the asteroid is actually designated PM-1203. This will need to be corrected. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:53, June 22, 2015 (UTC)
    • Well, there's nothing in need of correction. Everything in the article correctly states that Fort Anaxes is an asteroid base, which it is. I'll simply add in a link to PM-1203 where appropriate. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 17:56, June 22, 2015 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
  • Mandalorian needs to be linked to something in the intro and body. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:04, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
    • Hey GT. I've actually responded to this objection in multiple noms before. As you can see, Mandalorian/Canon is protected from being created. The reason is that, canonically, Mandalorian is currently just a demonym. There would be no difference between content in Mandalorian/Canon and Mandalore—unlike, say, Alderaanian vs Alderaan. So we won't be creating Mandalorian/Canon at this time. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 15:11, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
      • In which case it should at least link to Mandalore. Green Tentacle (Talk) 16:06, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
        • I have been told on multiple instances not to do that, so I haven't done it on any previous noms. I would like a firm answer on this before I add it to this nom, that way it can be consistent with other articles. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 16:09, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
          • Can I get an update here? I'm inclined to go with existing precedent for this, so unless something changes, can this objection be struck? - Brandon Rhea(talk) 04:12, September 18, 2015 (UTC)
Yung Floydman
  • Need some context on the Ghost in both the intro and the body—I think just the make of the starship would be fine.
  • I think it's worthy of note while you're describing the attack that the other crew did not know why they were attacking the convoy.
  • "was a member of a loose rebel collective that Senator Organa secretly championed and operated under the codename "Fulcrum."" This sentence makes it sound like Organa is Fulcrum, please rearrange.
  • You should mention that the attack took place on Lothal in the intro. IFYLOFD (Talk) 16:08, September 26, 2015 (UTC)
    • All done. - Brandon Rhea(talk) 18:34, September 26, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 03:24, October 13, 2015 (UTC)