Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ashaar Khorda

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Ashaar Khorda

  • Nominated by: Chack Jadson (Talk) 16:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Recently passed GAN, about 1,050 words.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:29, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 23:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 16:31, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 18:23, March 28, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:24, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. Pasta quickie:
    • It should be clarified the roles that Wesell and Fett played in retrieving the artifact and deciding to stop Khorda. They were pitted against each other at first, skirmishing in their own unique way to acquire it. Then, Wesell was the impetus behind Fett deciding to stop the madman.
    • Also, it should be clarified that the Jedi were not allied with the bounty hunters, as they learned about the situation and arrived, while simultaneously, separately.
    • — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)
  2. The Grand Master
    • The intro's chronology is slightly confusing; you say that he attempted to destroy Coruscant, before going back to his attempted rebellion on Annoo.
    • Maybe create an article for the skirmish in which Khorda died?
    • Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster Jedi symbol (We seed the stars) 20:46, March 25, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Any chance of another image? It's long enough to take one. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:41, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:24, March 29, 2010 (UTC)