Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ackmena/Legends

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Ackmena

• Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 08:37, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: And then there's Ackmena. RIP, Beatrice Arthur. Femputer. Golden Girl. Space bartender.

(5 Inqs/7 Users/12 Total)

Support

1. I gave it an in-depth skimming but overall I'm voting in memory of Ms. Arthur. RestInPeace. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 10:03, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
2. Great article; RIP Ms. Arthur. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:28, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Come back soon, I'll be waiting! Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:46, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:22, 26 April 2009 (UTC)
5. She knows how it feels to be a fembot living in a manbot's manputer's world. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:53, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
6. —Lucius malfoy7 ^{(Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents!)} 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
7. R.I.P. Bea Arthur. Master Jonathan^{Jedi Council Chambers} 01:26, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
8. A great article. Humorous and amorous. Dark Father 11:31, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
9. Goodnight, Dorothy. :( Graestan^(Talk) 03:03, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
10. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 03:37, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
11. Great work, 4Dot. --Darth tom (Imperial Intelligence) 10:34, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
12. QuiGonJinn^{There's always a bigger fish.} 12:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Somebody's gotta object:
   • "based on the life of Alliance war hero, Luke Skywalker.": Specify which Alliance.
     • Specified.
   • "due to subversive activities, a curfew was to be placed on the Tatooine system": What kind of "subversive activities"?
     • Not specified in the source. Thefourdotelipsis 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
   • "They eventually formed their own troupe,": Does this troupe have an article? If so, it should be linked; if not then a redlink might be warranted.
     • Redlinked.
   • "Their production inspired Myhr Rho, a regular, to start up a tour of Tatooine […]" A regular of what?
     • Specified.
   • "In addition to her other skills, Ackmena was considered a expert in mixology.": A bit of explanation as to what is meant by "mixology" needs to be added.
     • Tweaked.
   • Otherwise very good. Master Jonathan^{Jedi Council Chambers} 00:06, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)
2. I suppose I'd change the wording in the P&T from its more speculative tone about what Ackmena was like all the time to what she did in these specific instances. Graestan^(Talk) 02:18, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
   • Ah, good point. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 02:28, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
3. I think some context is needed for Caldera Righim, Teak Sidbam and Myhr Rho. QuiGonJinn^{There's always a bigger fish.} 20:07, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
   • They've already got context in preceding sentences. "She tried to get the patrons to leave," "The patrons began to leave," etc. Thefourdotelipsis 22:45, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
     • I only wanted you to establish their species, as you did with everyone else in the article. I've done it myself. QuiGonJinn^{There's always a bigger fish.} 12:00, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:36, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

1. I see that there are only two images. If you have CSWE, there's a fair Ackmena pic next to her entry. —Lucius malfoy7 ^{(Give it up for Lil' 'Soka Tano, ladies and gents!)} 01:22, 28 April 2009 (UTC)