Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/332nd Company

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

332nd Company

  • Nominated by: ComicalNinja [Talk] 21:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: GA nomination that got too big.

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Tommy
  • Do you really think it's okay to immediately nominate this without fixing the outstanding objections on the GAN?
  • As you've been told both on that GAN and your talk page, this article needs to be massively expanded. I'm looking for good detail for all events this unit was in, not just two sentences explaining an entire episode. That bit alone ought to be subsectioned paragraphs. Tommy-Macaroni 22:02, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Vitus
  • I agree with Tommy and will expand on some things on what I think this article should have:
    • Details about interactions, conversations, actions need to be further added and elaborated so there should be a large expansion.
    • This will result in large sections, so it would be good to add subsections.
    • As with all other FA nominations, if there are quotes for the subsections, add them.
    • Work into the article how they worked with the Mandalore resistance and the other members of the division of the 501st Legion.
    • A legacy section, since we have information on the article after the unit's fragmentation, meaning the flashforward with Vader.
    • More images.
    • Expanding the description section, and to include a subsection of Commanders and Members, and elaborate their use of vehicles, such as the LAAT/i gunship and how the company was located on at least one Venator. Be careful with AT-TEs, as they may not be from the company itself but from the division as a whole, however their actions should be detailed in relation to the 332nd (such as engaging Mandalorian commandos along with 332nd infantry).
    • With the expansion, the introduction should be longer as well.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:31, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Mr Star Wars
UberSoldat
  • The trivia gallery for Victory and Death's episode guide states the time skip to the Imperial Era is a number of years. Please add this to the article, sourced to this gallery. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:26, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • The other episode guides from the story arc can be added to Sources. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:38, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  • The "Returning to Coruscant" section should have an image of the company's troopers instead of Maul. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 19:07, May 22, 2020 (UTC)
    • Done. ComicalNinja [Talk] 20:04, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
      • Can you get a shot of the entire corridor instead of those two troopers? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:59, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
Erebus
  • There are a few notable battles missing from the list in the infobox. Make sure you add those to complete it, as the company was involved in the battles missing. Erebus(Talk) 18:39, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast
  • The second image in Return of Ahsoka Tano can be moved into the description to fill the vacancy there and relieve the image clump in the former section.
  • Siege of Mandalore section is too big should be bisected to distinguish the initial assault and the chase into the tunnels.
  • The whole battle from Phantom Apprentice is missing from the article. Fix 👏 it 👏. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 11:35, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure that the 332nd Company appeared much at all in The Phantom Apprentice. ComicalNinja [Talk] 20:04, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
      • Are you sure? There's a whole battle that goes on in that episode and I definitely saw orange helmets. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:15, May 31, 2020 (UTC)
  • Quote for Ambush in the undercity has no relation to the 332nd. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:15, May 31, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

  • Not an objection, but an observation. I've expressed this many times in the Wookieepedia Discord server. The source of the name originates from a blogpost on StarWars.com from an outside author, not an employee of Lucasfilm. With the situation from Hera Syndulla's mother in which a name was provided by a SW.com blogpost which turned out to not be real and an error from the author, it would be better to see if there's another official source that uses the name. If that's not possible, I think we should be aware of it for the future or what the options are.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 22:41, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

  1. Inqvote Two of Vitus' objections (requesting more info on the Mandalore resistance and a larger intro) are unaddressed for over 2 weeks. Furthermore, I don't think the nominator has demonstrated the needed commitment to see this nomination through. Along with those unaddressed objections, they also immediately nominated this FAN without completing outstanding objections on this article's previous GAN, and throughout this process have been reluctant to add the necessary detail to this article that has been requested by almost every reviewer. As such, if this article is renominated without the large amount of work required to have it at an acceptable level of detail (look at these to see the detail we're looking for), it will be liable to immediate removal under the nonsense nomination clause. Tommy-Macaroni 10:31, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:36, June 2, 2020 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote 1358 (Talk) 20:57, June 2, 2020 (UTC)