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Z-96
- Nominated by: Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 00:47, May 25, 2020 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Some fleet junkie love
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UberSoldat93
(talk) 12:08, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:42, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
QuiGonJinn (Talk) 08:34, May 28, 2020 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:15, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
- RattsT (talk) 10:02, June 8, 2020 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 12:34, June 25, 2020 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
Context for Synara San, Castilon, Kazuda Xiono, and Team Fireball.UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:19, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- All added. Thanks. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 12:05, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- All added. Thanks. Corellian Premier
I'm afraid I have to remove my vote after looking over the date note (which I should've noticed before). You've currently used a Legends source to date the event. It still needs more work, as Editor pointed out.UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:16, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Got the books mixed up. Fixed. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 15:27, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Could use some rewording to make it flow better. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:35, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, I rewrote it. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 16:37, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, I rewrote it. Corellian Premier
- Could use some rewording to make it flow better. UberSoldat93
- Got the books mixed up. Fixed. Corellian Premier
Editor
The Rise of Skywalker dictionary does not use ABY for dating so you need to change explain it more. However, I would recommend you use different sources. For example, this source from the Star Wars Resistance Page could be useful: <ref name="Date 34 ABY">{{InsiderCite|190|Resistance Revisited|''Resistance'' Revisited}} establishes that [[Star Wars Resistance Season One|''Star Wars Resistance'' Season One]] is set thirty [[Standard year|years]] after the [[Battle of Endor]], which in turn corresponds to [[34 ABY]], according to ''[[Star Wars: Galactic Atlas]]''.</ref>--Editoronthewiki (talk) 12:48, May 25, 2020 (UTC)- Adjusted, thanks for looking it over! Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 14:44, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- You can't use the Rise dictionary, as the source is Resistance Revisited. I know this article works as a canon source because it was used on Blue honeycup. Here is the exact wording, (thanks to user:AnilSerifoglu, who gave me the link back in March)--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:36, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, check again. I'm using Star Wars: Galactic Atlas. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 16:37, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Make this the note. Other users can give insight on how to improve it, but this should give the rough idea:<ref name="Date 34 ABY">{{InsiderCite|190|Resistance Revisited|''Resistance'' Revisited}} establishes that [[Star Wars Resistance Season One|''Star Wars Resistance'' Season One]] is set thirty [[Standard year|years]] after the [[Battle of Endor]], which in turn corresponds to [[34 ABY]], according to ''[[Star Wars: Galactic Atlas]]''. [[No Escape: Part 1]] establishes that the end of Season One is set concurrent to [[Star Wars: Episode VII The Force Awakens|''Star Wars'': Episode VII ''The Force Awakens'']], which ''Galactic Atlas'' dates to 34 ABY. Because the wreckage of a [[Z-95 Headhunter]] was salvaged during the Season One episode "[[Bibo (episode)|Bibo]]," the salvaging must also take place in 34 ABY.</ref>--Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:41, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, check again. I'm using Star Wars: Galactic Atlas. Corellian Premier
- You can't use the Rise dictionary, as the source is Resistance Revisited. I know this article works as a canon source because it was used on Blue honeycup. Here is the exact wording, (thanks to user:AnilSerifoglu, who gave me the link back in March)--Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:36, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, I've instituted it. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 21:51, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- One thing I failed to note. Just change "Around 34 ABY" to "In 34 ABY"--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:02, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 18:53, May 30, 2020 (UTC)
- Done. Corellian Premier
- One thing I failed to note. Just change "Around 34 ABY" to "In 34 ABY"--Editoronthewiki (talk) 22:02, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
- Adjusted, thanks for looking it over! Corellian Premier
Anil
I believe a ship not being used in the Clone Wars doesn't necessarily mean that it was produced after the Clone Wars.- Indeed. Adjusted. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 23:26, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
- What I mean is, we have no idea when the ship was introduced, we only know that it was not used in the Clone Wars. Also, on second thought, moving that part to a later section of the article would provide a better explanation for how Kaz recognizes the ship's model. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:32, May 29, 2020 (UTC)
- Addressed. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 18:53, May 30, 2020 (UTC)
- Addressed. Corellian Premier
- What I mean is, we have no idea when the ship was introduced, we only know that it was not used in the Clone Wars. Also, on second thought, moving that part to a later section of the article would provide a better explanation for how Kaz recognizes the ship's model.
- Indeed. Adjusted. Corellian Premier
As far as I can see there is nothing in the episode that identifies Z-96 as a starfighter.Even if you find a source for the starfighter thing, I believe it's redundant to repeat "Starfighter" twice for the role(s) field in the infobox.- Both addressed. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 23:26, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Corellian Premier
For the Ultimate Star Wars inconsistency, I see that the StarWars.com Episode Guide for "Bibo" also confirms that the wreckage is from a Z-95.- Sure. Added. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 23:26, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
- Sure. Added. Corellian Premier
I think the date note needs a little more work. It only dates the beginning of Kazuda's mission, meaning that the mission could have lasted for years, and the salvaging taking place years after 34 ABY. I'm pretty sure you can find a source to place the salvaging before an event of 34 ABY as well. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:36, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Jumping in here to say the season one finale was concurrent to Force Awakens, so this event must be 34 ABY. The Resistance Revisited article establishes it started in 34 ABY, and that finale shows it ended in 34 ABY. Therefore, it was salvaged in that year.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:05, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
- Added a slight note about its timeline. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 23:26, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
- Added a slight note about its timeline. Corellian Premier
- Jumping in here to say the season one finale was concurrent to Force Awakens, so this event must be 34 ABY. The Resistance Revisited article establishes it started in 34 ABY, and that finale shows it ended in 34 ABY. Therefore, it was salvaged in that year.--Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:05, May 26, 2020 (UTC)
Freed fanboy
"…a group of mechanics based on the supertanker fuel depot Colossus on the planet." missing something at the end. Also "based at" would work better so you're not using "on" twice over which sounds a bit bland to me.Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 22:16, June 4, 2020 (UTC)- Addressed; thanks. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 16:51, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
- No problem, have a vote. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 20:15, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
- Addressed; thanks. Corellian Premier
Ratts
Imp
Why do we need any mention of "No Escape: Part 1" in the ref note at all if the Insider article dates the whole first season?Imperators II(Talk) 08:57, June 17, 2020 (UTC)- It is to establish the end date for the range; I made a slight adjustment. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 22:53, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
- But that's exactly my point—in the absence of other placement info for specific episodes, the Insider article dating Season One to 34 ABY means it applies to every episode of the season. Therefore, the mention of the finale episodes is still unnecessary. Imperators II(Talk) 07:25, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Indeed; removed. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 22:58, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Indeed; removed. Corellian Premier
- But that's exactly my point—in the absence of other placement info for specific episodes, the Insider article dating Season One to 34 ABY means it applies to every episode of the season. Therefore, the mention of the finale episodes is still unnecessary. Imperators II(Talk) 07:25, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
- It is to establish the end date for the range; I made a slight adjustment. Corellian Premier
- Can you provide a more specific section of the Episode Guide in ref 7? Imperators II(Talk) 08:57, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Added. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 22:53, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Added. Corellian Premier
- It looks to me from the BTS section that the Sources item should be labeled with a
{{C|Erroneous mention}}or something similar. Imperators II(Talk) 08:57, June 17, 2020 (UTC)- I put that as-is. Thanks for the suggestions. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 22:53, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
- I feel like you should specify the same in the BTS, and then do without the last two clauses of the second BTS sentence. Imperators II(Talk) 09:34, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, done. Corellian PremierThe Force will be with you always 17:31, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
- OK, done. Corellian Premier
- I feel like you should specify the same in the BTS, and then do without the last two clauses of the second BTS sentence. Imperators II(Talk) 09:34, June 20, 2020 (UTC)
- I put that as-is. Thanks for the suggestions. Corellian Premier
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:34, June 25, 2020 (UTC)