Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Yarael Poof's lightsaber

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Yarael Poof's lightsaber

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:58, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A dangerous weapon for an individual with an incredibly vulnerable neck
• Date Archived: 17:38, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 403 words (0 introduction, 142 body, 261 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 200 words (0 introduction, 76 body, 124 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. CometSmudge (talk) 16:17, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 22:12, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
3. Zed42 ^(talk) 09:10, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 17:38, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The Vader issue needs a publisher, writer and illustrator. I also think you should include the cover artist for Shadows of Starlight and a release date and phase number as per precedent on THR articles Lewisr (talk) 18:23, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• Full release date for Super Graphics isn't needed Lewisr (talk) 18:23, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Removed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• The reference note for the kyber crystal should be formatted like Adi Gallia's first lightsaber and Laan Tik's lightsaber Lewisr (talk) 18:23, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• Living Force says that Yarael 'wielded his lightsaber with consummate skill' which I think should be noted here Lewisr (talk) 13:30, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added; phrased as "expert-level" to get around restating it verbatim. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:24, 5 August 2024 (UTC)

Comet

• Kyber crystal and Jedi Order are infobox exclusive
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• The first Legends appearance needs to be added to the BTS CometSmudge (talk) 18:30, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:56, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• The precedent seems to be to have Lightsaber combat in the purpose field of the infobox, so that should be added and linked somewhere in the body CometSmudge (talk) 21:54, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:59, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
• Since there's another comic mentioned between the Vader issue and the error in it, I think you should clarify that the error occurred in the Vader issue CometSmudge (talk) 17:14, 4 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:17, 5 August 2024 (UTC)

Dani

• Did the lightsaber receive a proper identification in Legends? NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 21:19, 3 August 2024 (UTC)
  • This does not appear to be the case judging by the sources I know of. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:43, 3 August 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• At about 9:38 here or so we do see it ignite and swing. It'll probably need a one-liner simply stating it appeared in the non-canon video game since most other canon topics do, even though it doesn't do anything, echoing Toos for this game and then Ronto Wrap which makes the briefest of mentions of each of the non-canon material those show up in. Other examples for ncc include Vizam, EV-9D9 and such).—spookywilloww^talk 02:17, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:12, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Zed

• Since the infobox image is specifically from Vader's vision, I do think the caption should have a note with {{C}} indicating that the image depicts the saber as seen in the vision. Zed42 ^(talk) 02:32, 7 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:12, 7 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:38, 7 August 2024 (UTC)