Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/XoLynn 9771 deflector shield generator

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XoLynn 9771 deflector shield generator

Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:38, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

Dentface (talk) 16:59, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 07:26, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:37, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:16, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:38, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

Does the source establish what, if any, military organization was Rose a part of at the time she made the simulated flight run? If existent, that kind of context would be more relevant to the subject than her age, gender, and species. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:48, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- No, it doesn't. She still lived with her parents on Hays Minor back then, I've written her age, gender and species just to provide some context. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:04, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  - Very well, then. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:21, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
If you're not treating XoLynn as a manufacturer, the title the article is currently at is just a shorter version of subject's longer name. By default, we go with the most formal names, therefore this article should be located at the longer title. Imperators II^(Talk) 20:20, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- With difficulty, but done. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:27, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
~~You should try and get an image that has at least a width of the minimum of 250px as mandated by the Layout Guide.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 20:22, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- Is this better? (431x438px) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 10:22, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
~~I'm confused: that image you sent me depicts a clone Z-95 Headhunter, not a classic Z-95 Headhunter...~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 11:40, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
- I don't know what to say, Poe Dameron: Flight Log states that the 9771 shield generator was mounted on the Z-95 Headhunter, not on the clone Z-95 Headhunter. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:09, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
  - The clone Z-95 is still a Z-95, so the two facts are not mutually exclusive. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:21, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Dent

~~You have several instances in the article where a book/comic title isn't properly italicized. Once in behind the scenes, once in reference 3.~~
- Fixed LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:53, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
~~Maybe describe Poe Dameron: Flight Log as a "replica journal" in the behind the scenes section?~~ Dentface (talk) 15:04, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- I understand what you mean, but I don't think that it should be mentioned. The Wookieepedia page about it calls it "a book" so I think that it is fine here too. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:53, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  - Black One needs to be italicized in reference 2. Dentface (talk) 15:58, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
    - Missed that, sorry. Fixed. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:07, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
      - No worries! That's what the nomination process is for. :) Next up, the article mentions that the generator has two names. Do both names originate from the same source, or does each source call the generator something different? If it's the latter, I recommend using {{1stID}}. For example: {{1stID|XoLynn 9971 deflector shield generator}} Dentface (talk) 16:20, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
        Done, thanks. (By the way, to do an objection that isn't related to the previous one you can use a single * again) LucaRoR ^(Talk) 16:53, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

Regarding the reference note, it's not clear how Black One's appearance correlates with Poe leading Black squadron. Also saying "but before Paige Tico's death" suggests a link between Poe leading Black Squadron, which clearly isn't the case. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:03, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
- Damn, I had totally messed up with the dates, fixed now. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:29, 4 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

I've removed XoLynn from the "manufacturer" field because it was disputed. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:38, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
- FWIW, there was no need for that page if it wasn't being treated as a manufacturer, so I've instead turned it into a redirect to what's essentially an alternate name of the subject. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:48, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
Please take note of my copy edit here. Dentface (talk) 15:04, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:38, 5 August 2021 (UTC)