Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Wish You Among the Stars

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Wish You Among the Stars

  • Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 20:52, March 7, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Checked over based on requirements and my own past experience with making a comprehensive article and believe it meets the requirements. Details covered, no redlinks, everything sourced. ProfessorTofty (talk) 20:52, March 7, 2015 (UTC)

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Support

  1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:52, March 10, 2015 (UTC)

Object

  • Could you be more specific then by the time of the Empire? The Servant of the Empire books take place at around the same time as Rebels or shortly before hand don't they? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • Not sure the body needs to be split, but that might just be personal preference. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • I think it looks better that way. I'd prefer to keep it that way unless there's any strong objection. ProfessorTofty (talk) 06:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • Context on Star Wars Rebels in bts. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
  • I think Heavy-Isotope needs an article of some sort. Is it a genre or band? Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • The book doesn't say. It just says that she switched over to a heavy-isotope remix, so any article about that couldn't really say anything more than that and wouldn't be much of an article. I think it's supposed to be music, but there really is very little detail. ProfessorTofty (talk) 06:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • "Oldie" doesn't seem like very encyclopedic language, could you reword it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:36, March 8, 2015 (UTC)
    • I could, but it's not my word, it's the book's. The book says that it's an "oldie," so I think we should call it an oldie. I suppose it could be put in quotation marks, though that feels out-of-universe somehow. ProfessorTofty (talk) 06:38, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
      • Given that you put treacly in quotation marks I don't see why it would be a problem here. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:25, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
Manoof
  • There's a couple things that need to be linked or have articles created - band, sound slug and legends stick out (as well as ayrehead's suggestion for heavy-isotope). You could also probably pipelink day to "morning". Since there's lots of articles on obscure things (like band), I usually test each noun in the search box on the side and see if it brings something up. Manoof (talk) 06:21, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • Band created, day linked. As for Sound Slugs - are you suggesting I create a Legends article regarding this? It seems to just be the equivalent of a musical top-ten list. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:22, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
      • There's a Sound slug article, I assume they are the same? Kind of like a "top 10 CD hits" type thing? Manoof (talk) 23:23, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
        • Sound slug is linked and I the other stuff is taken care of now too. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:14, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • You don't have to reference the name in the infobox. Manoof (talk) 06:21, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • Do a quick copy-edit, I noticed "performerd" in the BTS. Manoof (talk) 06:21, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • That's fixed. I didn't see any other problems. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:22, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
  • The end of the BTS may need to be clarified if both or one of the sources are now legends. If they're both, maybe say "...which were both rebranded..." Manoof (talk) 06:21, March 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • I reworded it. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:22, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
      • Have a look at where I moved the references for future... uh... reference... Manoof (talk) 23:23, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • Is Plexo-33 stated to be a band in the source?
    • Well, actually, no. It's a band in Legends and so I guess we've just sort of been rolling with the idea that it's a band in canon also, but it really doesn't specify such detail. Shall we just ditch that detail then and keep things vague about them? ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:14, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
      • Nothing should be assumed to be the same in Canon as it was in Legends.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:04, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Does the source state whether Plexo-33 created the song or just performed it?
    • Nope, which was why I was purposely vague and simply said that it was "by" them. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:14, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • Are there any related quotes?
    • Nothing said by any character, only narrative text, which I suppose could be quoted in Behind the scenes if desirable, though it wouldn't really add anything that wasn't already covered by the article itself. ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:14, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
  • The first sentence of the BTS seems overly long, please split it.
  • The second sentence of the BTS should be split as well.
    • Split that up as well.
  • I added a redlink for music.
  • The article is currently at 228 words, so you need to write an introduction to the article and section it. Here is another music status article to show you what the sections should be like: All Stars Burn as One--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:35, March 10, 2015 (UTC)
    • That's done, but I think I'm over the word limit now. Do we have to close this and move it to a Good article nomination? ProfessorTofty (talk) 02:14, March 19, 2015 (UTC)
      • Yes, I will close it so that you can create a good article nomination.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:04, March 19, 2015 (UTC)

Comments

  • Having just got the novel myself, the book also mentions that the song starts with glissando which was familiar to Merei, which needs to be added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:47, March 15, 2015 (UTC)