Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Water gun

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Water gun

Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:28, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
Nomination comments: it's September and yet it's still 100+ degrees here in Cali so I'm in a water gun mood
Date Archived: 01:42, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
Final word count: 179 words (0 introduction, 105 body, 74 behind the scenes)
Word count at nomination time: 132 words (0 introduction, 105 body, 27 behind the scenes)
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~~Source for Tatooine being a planet, the Slave I name, Fett and Shand titles. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 21:37, 4 September 2024 (UTC)~~
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:45, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
  - Can we switch the sources for planet and Fett+Shand's titles to episode 4, it uses all three. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 22:30, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
    - Switched. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:43, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
~~Date citation could use expansion. This short isn't BOBF, so the citation needs to establish the short's ties to the show. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 22:33, 7 September 2024 (UTC)~~
- Expanded. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:43, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

~~Mos Eisley could use some context~~ Lewisr (talk) 15:52, 5 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:18, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
~~Do we know that the water evaporated or did they simply run out? If it's not clear either way I think it's better to not assume~~ Lewisr (talk) 20:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Rephrased. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:21, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
  - Sorry maybe I wasn't as clear in what I meant, I think the part about it being due to evaporation or the heat should be removed entirely and simply left at them running out, since they could have just ran out of water by virtue of shooting it all Lewisr (talk) 00:39, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
    - Rephrased again. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 02:08, 10 September 2024 (UTC)

~~Seeing a Legends mention in Star Wars: The Old Republic, concerning Larris Cozekk.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 07:39, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added context of legends origin in BTS and pipelink to Legends article. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:30, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
  - Please do note that {{TORcite}} should be used. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:57, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
    - Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:12, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:15, 13 September 2024 (UTC)