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Veeka
- Nominated by: AmazinglyCool
(talk) 13:50, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
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- IFYLOFD (Talk) 14:16, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 16:20, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:34, 16 July 2021 (UTC)- Erebus Chronus (Talk) 00:25, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 20:33, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
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Macaroni
Body says they lived on Dathomir, but the infobox says they were native to it. Which is correct?Missing audiobook.JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 16:31, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed both. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 17:36, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed both. AmazinglyCool
Bts says they were mentioned, but appearances says they appeared. Which is it?JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 17:53, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 18:02, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed. AmazinglyCool
CC-8
The date reference should elaborate further, I'm assuming it places the events of Dark Disciple in 19 BBY so it should specify that and that the book includes the events with the Veeka.It's preferrable to have the intro sentence phrased so that the species name is bolded in its singular form.Precedent around food articles is to have Diet pipelinked with the word edible.Can the exact release date be sourced to Dark Disciple?Where did Ventress return from?Commander Code-8 Hello There! 05:34, 13 July 2021 (UTC)- Fixed all. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 16:52, 13 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed all. AmazinglyCool
Tiny thing, but it should be specified that Ventress and Vos were on Dathomir.It's in the non-sentient species category but I'm guessing the novel isn't explicit on that, so Category:Species of undefined sentience is probably a better fit.Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:21, 15 July 2021 (UTC)- Fixed both. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 15:43, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed both. AmazinglyCool
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:33, 19 July 2021 (UTC)