Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Variety

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Variety

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:25, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: How many Tag & Bink nominations have we even had at this point?
  • Date Archived: 00:07, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 115 words (0 introduction, 63 body, 52 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 04:44, 2 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Panther436 (talk) 05:57, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 00:06, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Unreffed field in the infobox Lewisr (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:40, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Infobox exclusive info Lewisr (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:40, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Full release date is needed for comic, as well as the writer and illustrator Lewisr (talk) 18:34, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:40, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Author and illustrator still needed Lewisr (talk) 20:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
        • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:33, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  • I don't believe you can really cite the final sentence of the BTS to the comic. Looking at your nom on Spanish and the examples provided there, similar should be done here Lewisr (talk) 20:23, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Changed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:57, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
Panther
  • Right now the second sentence reads as though the Red Guard was the one telling Anakin about Plagueis; the pronoun needs to be clarified. Panther436 (talk) 20:20, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Rephrased. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:24, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I think it's worth making the connection that the "Lucas Pix" article was in the publication that the Red Guard was reading and you can say that the article was on the front page too. Panther436 (talk) 01:26, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Did this a bit back but I completely forgot to respond that it was changed here, my bad. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:18, 16 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:06, 18 January 2024 (UTC)