Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified skybus depot

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Unidentified skybus depot

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:21, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: another cohbo CAN wooo
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:25, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Slight tweak to remove the double use of location and to specify Csilla is the capital rather than a capital :) nice work! Manoof (he/him/his) 06:40, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
3. Samonic ^(Talk) 16:23, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 20:05, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:42, 27 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Copy-edit review notes:
  • Caregiver is capitalized when it precedes a name.
  • When pipelinking, always place all characters inside the link brackets. This includes plurals, possessives, italics, prefixes, and suffixes.
• "Borika offered" would make more sense if Borika was willing to pay for Thalias' stay at the inns or if the Cohbo was the owner of the inns. I think "suggested" is better in this context.
• Are these queries the question about Che'ri's extended Third Sight or something else? Samonic ^(Talk) 09:11, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
  • thanks, didn't know we formatted everything like that inside pipelinks
  • done
  • they are, but i elected not to specify as it would stray too far away from the article subject. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:28, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Yes, it would. I ask because Thalias didn't wait for the responses because she was summoned back to Csilla, she didn't wait because she told Borika who her brother was: Thrawn. She got the answers to her queries after telling Borika about Thrawn. You certainly have read the Borika chapters more times than I have, can you confirm this? Samonic ^(Talk) 12:01, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
      • Resolved via Discord. Samonic ^(Talk) 12:54, 10 December 2022 (UTC)
• The Ascendancy can be added to the depot's affiliations. Samonic ^(Talk) 09:07, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
  • added BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:17, 21 December 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Can you specify who/what summoned her back so as to avoid the passive voice? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:05, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
  • hows that? BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:59, 25 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:42, 27 December 2022 (UTC)