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Unidentified second Yresilini general
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:55, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: The sequel to the first one
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Support
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:43, 19 March 2021 (UTC)- Imperators II(Talk) 10:41, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 09:43, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
Object
Vergence
The infobox name is incorrect.VergenceScatter (talk) 14:06, 15 March 2021 (UTC)- That's a yikes for me. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:15, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
OOM
As with your Chiss Academy nom, the article should mention the affiliation of Tann's soldiers.- Clone Campaigns only says "A story is told amongst her troops" nothing on which soldiers they were.
- Can any reasonable assumption be made judging by context? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 06:56, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Tann is only seen leading Separatist forces but I just don't think the source is explicit enough that it was them telling the story. She could have had military experience before joining them, as she was already a general before the Clone Wars started. I think it's fine the way it is. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:06, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
- Can any reasonable assumption be made judging by context? OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 06:56, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
- Clone Campaigns only says "A story is told amongst her troops" nothing on which soldiers they were.
Could use some context regarding where the Chiss Academy's located.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 13:29, 17 March 2021 (UTC)- Added. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:29, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:45, 4 April 2021 (UTC)