Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified orbiting merchant-hub station

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Unidentified orbiting merchant-hub station

  • Nominated by: BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 19:12, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 02:30, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 155 words (0 introduction, 131 body, 24 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:Novels WP:AST

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:00, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:40, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:27, 20 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Imp
  • The |interest= field of the infobox can be filled in, plus the mention of the cafes will probably have to be shifted higher up to sort of be in the article's "Description" area as opposed to its "History" area.
  • The first mention of the Garwians in the text doesn't quite provide context for what they are - perhaps it can be shifted downward to where they are first discussed?
  • The Garwian Unity will require a smidgen of context.
  • "leading to their defeat" - the Garwians' or the Lioaoin? I suspect the latter but this should be made clearer. Imperators II(Talk) 07:40, 18 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:27, 20 April 2023 (UTC)