Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified museum (Jedha)

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Unidentified museum (Jedha)

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 20:11, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 17:25, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 213 words (0 introduction, 145 body, 68 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 215 words (0 introduction, 147 body, 68 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:35, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:18, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:27, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
  4. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 15:08, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Panther436 (talk) 04:43, 31 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

DFaceG
  • "an artifact that was part of a set of rods that controlled the Nameless creatures that fed on Force-sensitives." Not a run-on per se, but the repeated use of "that" (including it being the first word of the following sentence) makes this somewhat monotonous/repetitive. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:35, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Switched the second to something else Lewisr (talk) 06:28, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • The last sentence also feels like it drags a bit but it's not repetitive or grammatically incorrect so I won't object on it. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 05:36, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Was trying to play about with it to see if I could make it drag less but it wasn't really working better for me Lewisr (talk) 06:28, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:43, 31 March 2024 (UTC)