Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified leadership academy

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified leadership academy
    • 1.1 (3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Lew
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified leadership academy

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 13:26, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 22:51, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 103 words (0 introduction, 87 body, 16 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 20:57, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:49, 21 May 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 23:53, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:32, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Is there a way to reword the destruction bit? It seems to read as though as it was destroyed prior to Alderaan's destruction, when it's possible it was destroyed during the destruction of Alderaan itself Lewisr (talk) 14:28, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Tweaked. I’m somewhat running off of the wording from Glarus Lagoons/Istabith range; let me know if it works.—spookywillowwtalk 15:45, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
      • As I don't really know another way to word it, using the wording of what you've done on others is good enough for me for consistency's sake. Thanks! Lewisr (talk) 20:57, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:32, 28 May 2023 (UTC)