Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified elite squadron

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Contents

  • 1 Unidentified elite squadron
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.2 Zed
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Unidentified elite squadron

  • Nominated by: Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:21, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 21:14, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:54, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 22:02, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  4. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 19:56, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:44, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
  6. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:52, May 23, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • Context for Sector Command. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:20, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:09, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • This "sector" sounds like it has enough information for an article of its own. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 20:22, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Created--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:09, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Are these "individuals" the playable characters for the RPG? I don't own the book so I can't confirm this for myself. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:12, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Yes--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:34, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
      • If they're part of an RPG seed, this needs to be detailed in the article, with the accompanying {{RPGseed}}. See Oppressor as an example. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:38, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
        • I added it but I don't think it's necessary since it never goes into detail on the PC's actions like Oppressor does, and also since there is no completion of the RPG seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
          • You also need to detail the seed in the BTS just like Oppressor. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
            • Added--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • "...whether through combat or assassination." Is this the player's choice or words from Sector Command? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 15:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Hmm. The sentence reads "Sector Command assigns the PCs to hunt down and eliminate the enemy pilots, either through space combat or assassination."--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
      • Then you should remove that bit just to be safe. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:07, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
        • Done--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:28, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
        • Wait, remove the paragraph right?--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:29, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
          • No, just the bit I quoted above. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:30, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
            • Okay done. I also included the RPG seed template for the whole article since it's all part of the seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:36, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
              • The background info on the squadron and their actions shouldn't be placed in the template, it's just for anything that involves the PCs. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:39, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
                • Ah got it--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:41, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • When a source has numerous authors like this, they generally aren't listed in the BTS. Zed42 (talk) 20:06, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
    • Ah, removed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:54, May 18, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:52, May 23, 2020 (UTC)