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Unidentified elite squadron
- Nominated by: Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:21, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
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Fan26 (Talk) 21:14, May 17, 2020 (UTC)- UberSoldat93
(talk) 16:54, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Zed42 (talk) 22:02, May 18, 2020 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 19:56, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 08:44, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 01:52, May 23, 2020 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
Context for Sector Command.UberSoldat93(talk) 20:20, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Added--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:09, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
This "sector" sounds like it has enough information for an article of its own.UberSoldat93(talk) 20:22, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
- Created--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:09, May 17, 2020 (UTC)
Are these "individuals" the playable characters for the RPG? I don't own the book so I can't confirm this for myself.UberSoldat93(talk) 11:12, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Yes--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:34, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
If they're part of an RPG seed, this needs to be detailed in the article, with the accompanying {{RPGseed}}. See Oppressor as an example.UberSoldat93(talk) 15:38, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- I added it but I don't think it's necessary since it never goes into detail on the PC's actions like Oppressor does, and also since there is no completion of the RPG seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
You also need to detail the seed in the BTS just like Oppressor.UberSoldat93(talk) 15:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Added--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- I added it but I don't think it's necessary since it never goes into detail on the PC's actions like Oppressor does, and also since there is no completion of the RPG seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:43, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Yes--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:34, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
"...whether through combat or assassination." Is this the player's choice or words from Sector Command?UberSoldat93(talk) 15:47, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Hmm. The sentence reads "Sector Command assigns the PCs to hunt down and eliminate the enemy pilots, either through space combat or assassination."--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Then you should remove that bit just to be safe.UberSoldat93(talk) 16:07, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Done--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:28, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Wait, remove the paragraph right?--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:29, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- No, just the bit I quoted above. UberSoldat93
(talk) 16:30, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Okay done. I also included the RPG seed template for the whole article since it's all part of the seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:36, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- The background info on the squadron and their actions shouldn't be placed in the template, it's just for anything that involves the PCs. UberSoldat93
(talk) 16:39, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- Ah got it--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:41, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- The background info on the squadron and their actions shouldn't be placed in the template, it's just for anything that involves the PCs. UberSoldat93
- Okay done. I also included the RPG seed template for the whole article since it's all part of the seed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 16:36, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
- No, just the bit I quoted above. UberSoldat93
- Hmm. The sentence reads "Sector Command assigns the PCs to hunt down and eliminate the enemy pilots, either through space combat or assassination."--Vitus InfinitusTalk 15:56, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
When a source has numerous authors like this, they generally aren't listed in the BTS.Zed42 (talk) 20:06, May 18, 2020 (UTC)- Ah, removed.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 21:54, May 18, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:52, May 23, 2020 (UTC)