Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified bearded snake-woman therapist

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Unidentified bearded snake-woman therapist

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 17:42, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: take a good look people because this is your CoTY 2022 :p
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Novels WP:Women

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Support

1. If we end up with a new CoTY category for characters without an image, this one, this unenlightened snake-woman, shall… be the second article on the list, only topped by Crofyp. 😛 Samonic ^(Talk) 19:09, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
2. Keep that Freed content coming! Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:33, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:44, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
4. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:15, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 15:37, 20 November 2022 (UTC)

Object

Unidentified Kilji with wrinkly soft patterned orange skin

• You bold therapist, however, that word is not mentioned in the article title. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:39, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
  • fixed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 18:58, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

Unidentified non-bearded human female social worker

• The structure of the first sentence has me confused: did the therapist work at the medcenter in 5 ABY? 6 ABY? (It's not clear in context what year the Battle of Jakku happened in). Immi Thrax (she/her) 13:03, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
  • this part of the book takes place eleven months after Jakku, so could be 5 ABY, could be 6 ABY. tweaked, lmk if it works.
• "having been offered a session with a droid instead". It's a bit unclear how this connects to the rest of the sentence. For instance, is this saying that because Chadic missed her scheduled appointment with the snake-woman, she started seeing a droid so she wouldn't have to wait a month? Immi Thrax (she/her) 13:03, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
  • so she gave up because she missed the appointment with snake lady, and didn't want have her session with the droid. reworded BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:38, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Made some suggested edits for how to clarify this and the above objection--see if those work for you or if you'd like to revise further? Immi Thrax (she/her) 17:27, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
      • nah looks fine to me BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:38, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
• There are several more details to pull out of this and put in terms of why the one month delay mattered and how Chadic felt about seeing the therapist. Marking them with bolded numbers and italics to help pick them out: "Eleven months after Jakku, that left her [1] not much cash and only a month to find more. [2] Therapy had been more frustrating than helpful, and when she'd missed an appointment (not her fault—[3] the tram had broken down) and been told the bearded snake-woman [4] she liked at the clinic couldn't reschedule for another month ("But a droid is available [5] right now!" the cheery desk clerk had offered, she'd given up on therapy altogether." Immi Thrax (she/her) 17:27, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
  • got it BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:42, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

Unidentified non-bearded Braha'tok-class gunship

• Not seeing anything that calls Corulag a planet and offworld (which I found in the passage) could apply to other astronomical objects imo. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:59, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
  • ref fixed, thanks for the find! BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:38, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Unidentified bearded astrography channel

• Is there any occupation category that would be applicable to this article? Imperators II^(Talk) 11:22, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Category:Healers and doctors seems the best option, added BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:40, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:25, 20 November 2022 (UTC)