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Unidentified astronomical object (Marda Ro)

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Support

  1. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 20:31, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 02:33, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:30, 3 March 2024 (UTC)

Object

Lew
  • Generally on these astronomical objects we use Template:Planet Lewisr (talk) 23:02, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Should note the object is a terrestial one, with the relevant category too Lewisr (talk) 23:02, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
  • In the story Marda notes 'This Jedi walked through an eclectic marketplace on—no, I won't say. I was there to hunt.' this last bit of her not wanting to say it's name should be noted for when she did the recording Lewisr (talk) 23:02, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Included it in the recording mention Sanathestarr (talk) 11:16, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Should be a mention of the recording Marda created for her descendants Lewisr (talk) 23:02, 24 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Added. If I had a nickel for every time I forgot this... Sanathestarr (talk) 11:16, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
Imp
  • Does Ro's line of the quote not have ending punctuation in the story? Imperators II(Talk) 08:14, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
  • Do we know why Ro approached the Jedi and attacked him? It'd be good to note that as a bit of context for her actions if we do. Imperators II(Talk) 12:05, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
    • She doesn't say the reason for neither approaching the Jedi nor attacking him, but she does talk about not liking Jedi if that counts. Sanathestarr (talk) 14:39, 25 February 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • The body should use terrestrial somewhere, preferably first sentence just before the bolding.
    • Just a note that this isn't actually always necessary since it's already implied by the use of the preposition "on" (from which we're deriving that fact to begin with). Imperators II(Talk) 08:24, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Done Sanathestarr (talk) 20:35, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Is the marketplace notable enough for its own page given it appears and all?—spookywillowwtalk 23:30, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Idk, is it? The article would be basically identical to this one, the only mention of it is "the Jedi walked through an ecclectic marketplace on—no, I won't say." The rest of the scene is basically just dialogue and the description of the Jedi she assaults Sanathestarr (talk) 20:35, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
      • I mean, a similar case is how Todouhar and Todouhar spaceport are basically the same, but the reason why both need to exist is because one is an astronomical object and one is a location article. So even if it hadn't been mentioned in a quote, the events that happen there still get documented on the location's article.—spookywillowwtalk 20:39, 1 March 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • I am aware that the page is titled "astronomical object" while the quote says planetside. I've checked on discord to see if the reasoning for not treating it as a planet is acceptable, but just for clarity repeating here; imo, as the exchange happens on a ship, "planetside" does not necessarily indicate that the astronomical object is a planet and it could have just been used in place of "moonside" or "asteroidside" which are words that english doesn't have. Sanathestarr (talk) 21:53, 24 February 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:30, 3 March 2024 (UTC)