Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Sith witch

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Unidentified Sith witch

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:35, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Witches are cool, especially if they're Sith

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Tommy Macaroni 12:31, April 1, 2018 (UTC)
   • Thank you for your review and support!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:19, April 1, 2018 (UTC)
2. 1358 ^(Talk) 20:50, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
   • Thanks!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:24, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
3. Nice work! --Lewisr (talk) 22:26, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
   • Thanks!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:27, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
4. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:14, May 19, 2018 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:54, May 21, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Lewisr

• Twilight of the Apprentice doesn't mention anything about the Galactic Civil War --Lewisr (talk) 16:36, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed!--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:46, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
    • Still in your first note :P --Lewisr (talk) 16:54, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
      • Ah, should be all of it now--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:55, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• You should probably add that she died on Malachor in the infobox --Lewisr (talk) 19:27, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:19, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
• Just a quick question, does Dawn of Rebellion say the battle was fought between the Jedi Order or just the Jedi? --Lewisr (talk) 19:27, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • Only states Jedi, no Order. Twilight mentions Jedi Knights, Darth Maul part II also only mentions Jedi.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:19, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, was just checking --Lewisr (talk) 21:27, March 31, 2018 (UTC)

Tommy

• Female is infobox exclusive.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Who wrote Dawn of Rebellion and when was it released (year is fine)?
  • Can't find author, year added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
    • Is the author not mentioned in the book itself (I presume you have it)?
      • No a friend sends pics and searches the book for me fortunately, I'm going to be getting the book soon. I forgot to ask him if he can find the author, I'll do so now--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:35, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
        • Don't worry, Toprawa found them.Tommy Macaroni 19:00, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
          • Added authors--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:19, March 31, 2018 (UTC)
• "in the battle, since the" should have a full stop (period for you Americans), not a comma.
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• I think you should say "petrifying and killing all the combatants", to show the witch herself died.
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Is the "established that millennia before the mission to Malachor," necessary to the first ref note, which is just to say she died.
  • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Your Sith Empire ref should be used in the body too, not just the infobox, Tommy Macaroni 17:20, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:40, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
    • Surely that now makes your Darth Maul, Part II ref redundant?Tommy Macaroni 17:47, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
      • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:28, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
• Why do you need both ref 3 and ref 5? If Star Wars: The Force Awakens: The Visual Dictionary doesn't mention the witch, you need to use the full ref you use in the infobox. Tommy Macaroni 18:35, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • Good catch. I fixed it but had to re-add it in another point in the article for a reference to what the cold war is--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:11, April 19, 2018 (UTC)

Ecks Dee

• As per WP:MOS#Naming_articles, you shouldn't have links in the bolded part; you'll have to link that stuff later.
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:20, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
• You should avoid referring to things as "unidentified", even in the Bts. It's unlikely they're unidentified in the Star Wars universe. You can, however, write in the Bts that they were unnamed in the source. 1358 ^(Talk) 01:05, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:20, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
• There's no reason why you shouldn't establish a more concrete timeline. We apparently know that the mission to Malachor took place in 3 BBY. Why not say that the Great Scourge of Malachor took place millennia before 3 BBY instead? 1358 ^(Talk) 17:14, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Time was incorrect, fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:27, April 11, 2018 (UTC)
    • One of your references says "millennium" while the rest of the article uses "millennia". Which is correct? 1358 ^(Talk) 20:41, April 13, 2018 (UTC)
      • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 20:44, April 13, 2018 (UTC)

AV

• Context for Cold War please. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 18:29, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:11, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
• We're going to need a rough start and end date for the Cold War as well. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 16:51, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 12:59, April 29, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• You don't actually link to Malachor or say it's a planet anywhere in the body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:21, May 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:56, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• I swear I thought comprehensive articles got 2 weeks for unaddressed objections--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:00, April 29, 2018 (UTC)
• I will be on vacation and thus unavailable between May 31st to June 18th. I will not be able to address objections during that time as I will have no effective means of doing so. I will be taking care of all raised objections between now to the 31st, thank you for understanding.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:46, May 19, 2018 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

Unaddressed objection more than a week old. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:07, April 29, 2018 (UTC)

Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:07, April 29, 2018 (UTC)