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Unidentified Jedi (Kouru)
- Nominated by: Stake black msg 11:57, 22 October 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 01:50, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 214 words (0 introduction, 112 body, 102 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 215 words (0 introduction, 105 body, 110 behind the scenes)
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Support votes
—spookywillowwtalk 00:30, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 01:34, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
CometSmudge (talk) 01:49, 4 November 2025 (UTC)
Objections
spookly
From the way the BTS is phrased, it seems like a {{1stdesc}} might be missing by the novel in Appearances? If it is the first thing to elaborate on the Jedi being a specific individual rather than vaguely 'last time I killed...' Either that tag, or if it's just another general second mention that doesn't require a 1stdesc tag, the sentence is irrelevant for BTS purposes since we don't really source-regurgitate anymore to mention anything outside of 1sts, for the most part unless its an odd case.—spookywillowwtalk 20:48, 22 October 2025 (UTC)- Added {{1stdesc}}. Stake black msg 00:17, 23 October 2025 (UTC)
I don't believe the BTS image caption succinctly gets across the relevancy of why the image is there, as it being the poster isn't really needed and draws away from why we usually add milestone images with the extra verbiage. Similar to Lew's objection here and his subsequent copy-edit, which this article should essentially match (which in turn, matches the standard of most other modern SAs if they have BTS images of a media poster or cover).—spookywillowwtalk 23:47, 30 October 2025 (UTC)- I've added the novel's cover as Lew suggested. Stake black msg 01:22, 31 October 2025 (UTC)
Lew
I feel like the manner of the Jedi's death should be mentioned sooner in the article, since it should be chronologically ordered, rather than how it was revealed. And then the recollection can come afterLewisr (talk) 22:19, 28 October 2025 (UTC)The sentence starting with 'Further details about his encounter with Kouru' should be tweaked to more clearly establish the book was the 1stdesc, like Aurin's stallLewisr (talk) 22:19, 28 October 2025 (UTC)Seems like the article with the poster should be added as a sourceLewisr (talk) 22:19, 28 October 2025 (UTC)- Addressed. Stake black msg 23:18, 28 October 2025 (UTC)
I think the BTS has room for an image of the novel's coverLewisr (talk) 16:59, 30 October 2025 (UTC)- I added the film's poster to tie in with the last sentence. Stake black msg 20:19, 30 October 2025 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:49, 4 November 2025 (UTC)