Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Chaf task force

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Unidentified Chaf task force

• Nominated by: Samonic 08:03, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Chaf'orm'bintrano's fleet; 1st nomination related to the… Chiss.
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Support

1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:52, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:00, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:48, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:31, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
5. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:36, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• "saving the survivors found aboard" I think it's worth mentioning that starship had passengers. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 07:25, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Outbound Flight didn't fail at this :P Done. Samonic 08:59, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

Thrawn

• Template:Chiss Ascendancy military units and Category:Chiss military units are both missing. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 11:22, 16 June 2022 (UTC)
  • I was not aware of either's existence. Added. Samonic 20:46, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

CC-8

• The passengers on the ship should be mentioned earlier when talking about the capture of the ship Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:22, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Corrected. Samonic 16:18, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
• Is it specified whether the task force caused the damage to the ship? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 10:59, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
  • No, it isn't specified. We only know what is said in the article. (It didn't damage the ship [Outbound Flight] in Outbound Flight either) Samonic 12:41, 17 July 2022 (UTC)
• The details about Thrass and not-Jinzler's fate are too unfocused for the purposes of this article, at the most it should say that the ship crashed. Probably don't need to specify that they wanted to take it to a planet either Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:36, 18 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. Samonic 07:16, 18 July 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Any reason why why it says "was determined to gain sole possession" instead of just "gained sole possession"? If someone determined the events afterwards should that get a seperate sentence after describing the events? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:30, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
  • "'A massive alien spaceship, snatched out from under the noses of a Chaf task force determined to gain sole possession of it. He and a single human female from Lesser Space, attempting to take the ship to an uninhabited refuge world from which they could offer the treasure trove of Republic technology to the full Hierarchy Defense Council." Samonic 14:05, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
    • I think we need a synonym here, e.g. say the task force was determined to achieve their mission/goal, something like that :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:07, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
• That last sentence doesnt make sense and needs cleaning up. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:30, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Sorry about that, are my changes better? Samonic 14:10, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Much better thanks! Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:07, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
• BTS needs to better connect the canon and legends fleets as it is not clear why the legends fleet is mentioned Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:30, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
  • Better? Samonic 15:35, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
    • Yep, just need to mention in there that this is the Legends continuity :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 04:07, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
      • Mentioned. Samonic 07:41, 16 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:36, 20 July 2022 (UTC)