Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Trandoshan funk

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Trandoshan funk

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:01, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I think this is the first Survivor nom :P
• Date Archived: 01:21, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 121 words (0 introduction, 104 body, 17 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:VG

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Support

1. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 06:19, 8 May 2023 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:35, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 20:02, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 23:22, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 01:19, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Marvac

• Please add context for Koboh and Kata Akuna. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 14:23, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
  • I think the context I have for Koboh is enough, and I tweaked my context for Kata to specify that shes young and a new recruit. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:32, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Sorry I should have specified. You have added context already for Koboh. From what I have seen, all that’s needed is just mentioning that Koboh is in the Outer Rim. Regarding Kata, I think it’s important to also mention that Kata was adopted (no need to go into specifics for this correction) Marvacian Archivist (talk) 15:21, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Forgot to reply earlier, and you already struck it.... buttt I don't want Jocasta to ping me on Disc in 6 days, so here's my reply :P AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:18, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
        • No worries. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 04:44, 7 May 2023 (UTC)

Lew

• There appears to be something in the way of punctuation missing at the end of Kata's piece of dialogue, either a ! or . I'd assume. Could you confirm? Lewisr (talk) 16:58, 12 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Added a period as according to game's recent conversations. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:59, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
    • Thanks for confirming! Lewisr (talk) 20:02, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• Is it really necessary to mention Akuna as adopted? If so, then it should be clarified she was adopted by the Mantis crew.
• "Cal Kestis stated that they would be located at...Pyloon's Saloon. " I'm not quite sure what "they would be located at...[the] Saloon" means exactly. Is this saying that Cal told Akuna the group was staying at Pyloon's? Fan26 (Talk) 00:54, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
  • Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:16, 14 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 01:20, 14 May 2023 (UTC)