Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Talisman of Age

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Talisman of Age

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:41, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

(Votes required: 1 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

1. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:56, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:21, 29 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

Talisman of Macaroni

• Witches of Dathomir is infobox-exclusive.
• Context on the Spirits? JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:58, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:14, 19 July 2021 (UTC)
• The Spirits article implies that they might not have existed—if that's the case, you should briefly mention that here. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 15:49, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:26, 20 July 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• It's always better to be clear on things rather than include phrases such as "may have." Did the Spirits exist? If the answer can be neither yes nor no, than you should just say that they were "beings of Nightsister mythology" or whichever phrase works best OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:40, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:27, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
• See my copy-edit. Also, note that the "H" should always be capitalised when used to refer to Humans in Legends. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:44, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:50, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
• You can include a quote from Talzin since Book of Sith is an IU writing (example: Taozin) OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:49, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
  • There is a quote there. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:50, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Whoops, missed that somehow. Then lastly, the talisman doesn't restore one's youth—it restores the vigor of youth. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:51, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:54, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Great, and I'm glad that you spotted Wild Power missing from the quote attribution OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:56, 24 July 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Since we appear to have multiple talisman pages on the wiki. I think a general page for talismans is in order, along with a disambiguation template at the top of this article. UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:54, 25 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. My objection has been unaddressed for over 7 days. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:45, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:41, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:48, 2 August 2021 (UTC)