Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/T-S Seven

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Contents

  • 1 T-S Seven
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Ziara
      • 1.1.3 Comments

T-S Seven

  • Nominated by: NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 13:14, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: When I began working on this, it was labled as a vehicle. I think that's an assumption and made it the more ambigious "technology." Uncertain if that could also be an assumption, and, if so, what else to describe it as.
  • Date Archived: 17:35, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 166 words (0 introduction, 60 body, 106 behind the scenes)
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(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 16:31, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  2. BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 18:24, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 14:38, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
  4. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:23, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Gotta love when 2 lines of dialogue lead to 4 CANs. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:26, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara
  • youre sourcing the entire first sentence to the date note :P
    • Literally screamed a "FUCK" irl upon reading this. x.x Fixed. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:11, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  • the last two sentences should be merged and wrote out in a way that doesnt repeat the dialogue in the quote. rather play-by-play as it is
    • I had a pre-nom objection that it should have the quote written in prose. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:11, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
      • i agree that it should be written in prose, but simplified + merged into a single sentence BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 01:39, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  • how would you feel about mentioning the stormtroopers talking about new models in SW media as a "recurring theme" instead of going into detail about that specfic ANH instance?
    • I think tying this instance to the original and stating it's a recurring theme is enough. The original instance (VT-16) should detail all instances in my opinion. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:11, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
      • i more meant removing the details of the original ANH one just keeping the last sentence, as i think that covers the idea perfectly. thoughts? BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 02:14, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
        • 2nd+3rd obj. How's that? NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 15:59, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  • re: last objection: given the recurring theme, id say its valid to list the T-S Seven and the VE Series as a vehicle BloodOfIriziSabine Starbird(Syndicure) 00:59, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
    • VT-16, T-15, T-17, and T-18 aren't listed as vehicles. Their sources are only the quotes from their narrative stories. In Legends it seems the VT-16 referred to a droid. But in Canon it hasn't been established what any of them are. The T-16 (referenced in Kanobi "Part III") is a vehicle, I'm hesitant to say any not directly linked to it as vehicles. We have Droids with R2 designations that aren't R2 series astromech droids and also the TS-series interrogation droid exists. Basically, I don't think we should assume. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 15:59, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:26, 16 April 2023 (UTC)