Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sunrise's sun

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Sunrise's sun

• Nominated by:ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 22:11, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Unfortunately we don't get the sunrise of Sunrise's sun, we only get the sunset of Sunrise's sun.
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Support

1. Learnt something new with this one; good work! — Samonic 12:01, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
3. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 03:40, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
4. Lewisr (talk) 14:41, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
5. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:35, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• Since the name and article are conjectural, the body should reflect that. As such, it should not start with "Sunrise's sun," since that appears as non-conjectural.
• As the article has only a single source in which it's included, please remove "first" from the BTS. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 05:10, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • All addressed. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 11:56, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Samonic

• If it is a mention, you should not establish it as an appearance.— Samonic 09:07, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • As per the quote below, (not an in universe quote, just text from the book) Qilori saw the sun, which means that it is an appearance

Imp

• Please describe in the body the occasion when the star was visible and who was watching it. (See Ando (star) for an example.) Imperators II^(Talk) 09:12, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The occasion has been described. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 11:56, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• "Pathfinder" currently links to a disambiguation page, please revise.
• I'm assuming the "dining area" was on Sunrise, do we know a more specific location for it? Imperators II^(Talk) 12:15, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Link has been fixed. Yes it was located in a mining compound, which is now noted in the article. -ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 12:20, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Here is the mention in Thrawn Ascendancy: Lesser Evil He (Qilori) was sitting alone in a corner of the compound's dining area, watching the red clouds surrounding the sun as it sank toward the horizon and tried to put some of the day's more stomach turning images out of his mind, when he had a pair of visitors. It doesn't say that the sun made the clouds red, so we can't assume anything. Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:31, 30 April 2022 (UTC)