- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
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Spicebrew/Canon
- Nominated by: AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 21:58, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
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Support
- Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:43, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
Your going to need a bts, including the legend origins, the first appearance and its identifying source.Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:03, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 22:11, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Context on Old Jho's pit stop.Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:03, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 22:17, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Timeframe is needed in the body.Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:03, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 22:17, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
You should specify that he drinks it during the events of Empire Day.Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:03, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 22:17, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
- I don't think you can reference the days and months in the bts to the books themselves or the episode. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:04, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
- Did what I could to source Ezra's Duel with Danger, though Medstar is more difficult. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 23:08, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Doesn't Empire day take place every year? If so could you reword the last sentence.Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:04, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 23:09, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Clone
The BtS should be sourced.--Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:17, March 23, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 22:38, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Cadeth
- That image is rather poor. Please get someone who's actually experienced with image capturing to upload a new one. Cade
Calrayn 22:30, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
- I captured it. What exactly needs to be better, instead of me remaining in the dark on a proper procedure? Other than that, it's really the only clear shot of Tsoklo's drink. --Clonehunter(Report your W.M.D.) 22:43, March 23, 2015 (UTC)
Manoof
- The last sentence of the first paragraph in the BTS needs to be fixed. You could actually remove the entire sentence, keeping the mention that it was an alcoholic drink and rewording the first sentence. Manoof (talk) 06:37, April 7, 2015 (UTC)
Unless it has been called something else, you can get rid of the "as spicebrew" part in the Appearances section. Manoof (talk) 06:37, April 7, 2015 (UTC)- "as spicebrew" is there because it isn't capitalized in the source in which it's named. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 17:32, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
The closing curled brackets for the infobox should be on the same line as the last attribute, so it should appear as "|affiliation=}}" Manoof (talk) 06:37, April 7, 2015 (UTC)- Done. - AV-6R7User talk:AV-6R7 13:43, April 7, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
- You cannot source the full release date to the MedStar novel.
- For consistency, please provide a date for the episode.
- I see that the owner of the cantina has an article. Please mention him in the article as he is the one providing the drink.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 17:27, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (EduCorps only)
Outstanding objections over seven days old. Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:41, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 04:42, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Talk) 04:42, April 27, 2015 (UTC)