Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Spicebrew

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Spicebrew

  • Nominated by: AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:35, March 11, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Original nomination can be found here.

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. —Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 17:32, March 20, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:43, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
  3. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 09:53, March 30, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 20:29, April 15, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 06:36, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

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Tommy
  • "Slurped" is a bit of an odd word choice, and feels a bit out of place. Could you replace it?
  • Instead of linking to 19 BBY, could you deduce when the Rebels episode itself takes place?
    • Of couse, we know it takes place in 4 BBY, but I'm not sure its necessary since the article already says that it was the fifteeth annual celebration of an event that happened in 19 BBY. Should I just pipelink it somewhere? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:31, March 18, 2018 (UTC)
  • "Spicebrew first appeared, albiet unidentified, in the new Star Wars canon in "Empire Day,"[2] a 2014 episode of the animated seriesStar Wars Rebels' first season.[4]"
    • Could you say "without identification"? Unidentified doesn't really work in the sentence flow.
      • Changed.
    • This sentence runs on a bit. Could you rephrase it to something like: "…in "Empire Day,"[2] a 2014 episode in the first season of the animated series Star Wars Rebels.[4]"
    • Do you need another ref to say the year of release and the season? Surely that could also be sourced to Empire Day itself.—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 18:37, March 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Can Tsoklo's name be sourced to Empire Day?—Tommy-Macaroni Imperial Emblem (TAKE A SEAT) 08:34, March 18, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • The first sentence is pretty fragmented, you could probably just remove the information about why it's named Jhotal. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:00, March 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • There's no need to call it new canon, just canon is fine as the distinction between canon and legends is clear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:00, March 27, 2018 (UTC)
  • The book doesn't describe Tsoklo as favoring the drink, but does describe him as slurping it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:00, March 27, 2018 (UTC)
    • Changed. I previously removed "slurped" because another reviewer thought it was out of place. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 23:40, March 29, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • Correct me if I'm wrong, but nothing in the episode guide dates the release to 2014 as far as I can see. 1358 (Talk) 11:24, April 4, 2018 (UTC)
    • Added source. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:34, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
      • Is there anything in the episode guide reference that the Insider reference doesn't cover? If not, just remove the epguide altogether and go with the Insider for that entire sentence. 1358 (Talk) 21:19, April 8, 2018 (UTC)
        • Yeah, the Insider article had all of that info. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:26, April 14, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators
  • Would it be possible at all to obtain a higher-quality image? The original uploader himself tagged the image The image has been tagged with {{Imagequality}}, and CAN Rule 11 stipulates we at least look into this. Imperators II(Talk) 16:32, April 16, 2018 (UTC)
    • I have the Blu-rays, but not the means to take screenshots on my player. I've started asking around, but maybe I could ask someone like JMAS. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 03:10, April 19, 2018 (UTC)
      • I've gone ahead and asked JMAS. If that doesn't pan out, I'll try Brules. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 17:17, April 20, 2018 (UTC)
        • JMAS uploaded new image a few days ago, but I didn't notice. How does that look? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:22, April 24, 2018 (UTC)

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