Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Skeezump

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Skeezump

• Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 20:58, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Skeezumps personify "drunk on life" to the most literal extent.
• Date Archived: 05:01, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 149 words (0 introduction, 101 body, 48 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Aliens, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:56, 4 April 2023 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 22:07, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 04:26, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 05:00, 14 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• You're still citing the book's preview. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:26, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:57, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
• The bts should mention that the subject was first mentioned in the preview. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:52, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:52, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
  • I've double-checked the preview, they aren't mentioned in it. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:54, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
    • Looks like they're mentioned on page 14 (or 29 of the preview). JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:59, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
      • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:41, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
        • Right now it kind of implies that the subject was created for the preview instead of for the book. Up to you, but I'd suggest sording it like Unidentified Mon Calamari (Mon Cala). JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:38, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
          • Further tweaked. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 13:48, 11 April 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• I think the line that refers to Cal as "the Stinger Mantis crew" is a little confusing...is Greez addressing just Cal or the entire crew? I think it could be worded better. Fan26 (Talk) 09:38, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Reworded. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:33, 7 April 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• Novel's release day should be noted, since it differs from the preview and they're both in the same year.—spookywilloww^talk 15:10, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 17:13, 8 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:00, 14 April 2023 (UTC)