Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Sixmoon (starship)

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Sixmoon

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 22:12, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: One of if not the first article I ever created.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:42, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
2. Zed42 (talk) 21:06, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 21:42, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:43, April 22, 2020 (UTC)
5. Fan26 (Talk) 16:50, April 23, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• "Another vessel there was the CR90 corvette Thunderstrike, the troop transport for the Sixty-First Mobile Infantry. So-Hem invited members of the battle group to visit the Sixmoon." The details of the first sentence can probably be merged with the following one, so that it's not ambiguous as to what "the battle group" refers to. Zed42 (talk) 02:20, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 09:16, April 18, 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• There's no reason not to mention within the article's body that the ship shared its name with the astronomical Sixmoon. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:45, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:54, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
• This should be located at the more formal Sixmoon (starship). Imperators II^(Talk) 12:50, April 20, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 19:37, April 20, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:50, April 23, 2020 (UTC)