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Sith armada

(4 ECs/3 Users/7 Total)

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  1. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 01:10, March 9, 2020 (UTC)
  2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:49, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
  3. --Editoronthewiki (talk) 15:10, March 11, 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:29, March 11, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 19:48, March 13, 2020 (UTC)
  6. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 15:11, March 15, 2020 (UTC)
  7. ECvote QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 10:19, March 16, 2020 (UTC)

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UberSoldat
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  • I doubt Wendig meant to directly refer to the Lost Tribe of Sith Armada; the link to that legends page should be removed. Fan26 (Talk) 18:31, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • "fought against the smaller Ghostfinder fleet, although it was outmatched" As I remember Empire's End, the Ghostfinder fleet was the outmatched one. I'd like this bit to be reworded so it's clearer that "outmatched" refers to the Ghostfinders. Fan26 (Talk) 18:49, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • Oops, that was an error. Fixed and reworded--Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:02, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
      • "Despite the advantage in numbers, the Sith armada was outmatched and outfoxed by the fleet." Does the book really provide all that information? As I remember it, the Ghostfinder fleet vs. the Sith Armdada was just tossed out as an example of an outmatched fleet besting a larger one.Fan26 (Talk) 14:01, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
        • It states how a smaller and lesser fleet outmatches and outfoxes the other.--Vitus InfinitusTalk 14:44, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
          • Could you provide the exact quote? Fan26 (Talk) 15:04, March 8, 2020 (UTC)
          • Actually nevermind. I think just saying they were outmatched is fine. Fan26 (Talk) 15:10, March 8, 2020 (UTC)
  • Also, I'd like a proper date ref explaining how Galactic Atlas can provide 5 ABY as the date when Ackbar was thinking about the armada. Fan26 (Talk) 19:00, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
    • Added--Vitus InfinitusTalk 19:02, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
      • The ref note needs to explain why Ackbar thinking about the fleet can be dated to 5 ABY. Fan26 (Talk) 14:01, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • In the last sentence of the BtS you reference two Legends sources, but have only one ref note. Please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 15:04, March 8, 2020 (UTC)
QGJ
  • An "armada" is a generic term that can refer to any large-scale fleet, therefore the term "Sith armada" could refer to any of the Sith fleets that existed in Legends, not just the KotOR and the Lost Tribe armadas. I suggest rewording the last sentence of the Bts by linking to the disambiguation page and just saying that there existed multiple Sith armadas in Legends, without naming specific ones. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:11, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
  • Ref note 2 needs work:
    • Gial Ackbar thought of the Ghostfinder fleet - This should mention that it occurs in Empire's End
    • Overall, I believe the note can be reworded to be more concise without repeating the same info (him thinking about the battle) twice. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 09:21, March 10, 2020 (UTC)
      • If I may chime in, I have dated the Battle of Jakku to 5 ABY, instead of Ackbar thinking about the Sith armada, in my copy-edit. That way, I believe there is no need for a date note. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:20, March 10, 2020 (UTC)

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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:17, March 16, 2020 (UTC)