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Sistermoon
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I hope I got all that Zuma crap right, Imp :P
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Imperators II(Talk) 09:43, 3 November 2021 (UTC)- LucaRoR
(Talk) 12:42, 3 November 2021 (UTC) - I wonder which of the canon moons is a counterpart to this. UberSoldat93
(talk) 16:18, 4 November 2021 (UTC) - OOM 224 22:49, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
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Imp
You're missing the fact that Endor was a part of the Outer Moddell systems, see Murk (planetoid).- Added.
You should also list as {{Imo}}s sources that explicitly say Endor had nine moons, for example, The Essential Atlas does that.Imperators II(Talk) 07:03, 28 October 2021 (UTC)- Added.
You also don't need the Ewoks 10 reference, you can just make do with TEA. Look at the abovementioned Murk, for example.Imperators II(Talk) 07:04, 28 October 2021 (UTC)- Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
The moon appears large by any measure in Endor's sky, please note that.- Done.
- It could just as easily be a small moon that only appears large from Endor's atmosphere due to it being very close to it. So you should move that descriptor to where you're discussing the moon's visibility from Endor.
- That what you meant?
- It could just as easily be a small moon that only appears large from Endor's atmosphere due to it being very close to it. So you should move that descriptor to where you're discussing the moon's visibility from Endor.
- Done.
Is the moon visible in Endor's sky during a particular event that's described in The Adventures of Teebo? If so, there's precedent for describing the appearances of celestial bodies in the skies of other objects. This would be particularly relevant in this case, since who knows how often any given one of Endor's nine moons is even visible in the Forest Moon's sky.Imperators II(Talk) 07:26, 29 October 2021 (UTC)- Added some info. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:30, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
- Does the source explicitly establish that the moon was regularly visible in late afternoon? (For comparison, our own Moon can appear in the Earth's sky at different times of the day.)
- Here's a quote from the book: "Purple shadows of late afternoon began to crawl across the darkening land below. The sistermoon climbed the horizon and the first stars twinkled above."
- Yeah, if that's all there is to it then you should specify that the moon was visible during late afternoon at that point where Teebo noticed the mantigrue. Imperators II(Talk) 14:53, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- Switched. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:57, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- Yeah, if that's all there is to it then you should specify that the moon was visible during late afternoon at that point where Teebo noticed the mantigrue. Imperators II(Talk) 14:53, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
- Here's a quote from the book: "Purple shadows of late afternoon began to crawl across the darkening land below. The sistermoon climbed the horizon and the first stars twinkled above."
- Does the source explicitly establish that the moon was regularly visible in late afternoon? (For comparison, our own Moon can appear in the Earth's sky at different times of the day.)
- Added some info. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:30, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
I feel like you could give a bit of context for mantigrue, most importantly that it was a flying creature. If we didn't have the infobox image, a reader could read the current sentence and imagine something like a wolf silhouetted against the moon.Imperators II(Talk) 08:41, 1 November 2021 (UTC)- Added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:48, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:49, 4 November 2021 (UTC)